| "I'm Looking In" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! lol im pleased with the ending. ^_^
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so glad that everything ended up happy and resolved!!! thanks for writing this.. i had a great time reading it!!!
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Reviewed By: InuXNoXYoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 21:43 CST
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AWww! I absolutely loved this story and I don't like that it's done >.< I WANT MORE!!!! Lol. The neding was cute, but short since I want more!!!!!!!!! But, like you said, it was short and sweet. Thank you for taking your time to write and finish this story!
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Reviewed By: InuXNoXYoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa... Haha Inu's so cute. Cocking his head to the side and whining. Such a baby act ^.^ hmm.. I wonder how Brandon know's InuYasha was there... wonder how he even knows him... We'll see. awesome job so far!!!
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Reviewed By: InuXNoXYoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 16:06 CST
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OMG!!!! DUH-DUH-DUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY S***! That's insane! Wow... I just finished reading the other story, I'm looking in, and I had to start reading this one. Wow!! I need to see waht happens!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 23:35 CST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i thought hat was too cute !!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 19:25 CST
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so caught up in the story..I actually just finished Chap 2 (DOH!)
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 19:23 CST
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ok, I know you say it won't last long (just finished Chap 1), but my heart is so totally broken right now! More so because I just finished reading "I'm on the Outside" non stop. But I will trust you and read on.
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just spent the last 2 1/2 hours reading this story. I just couldn't stop,it was really good, kinda wanted more details in the lemon but heh that's just my hentai heart. Looking forward to your next project.
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Reviewed By: blinkedy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYYYYY YOU FINISHED IT! TIME TO READ YOUR OTHER WORK
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Title: *sobs
Reviewed By: blinkedy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHHHHHHHH I'M BARELY STARTING ON THE THIRD CHAPTER AND I'M CRYING MY BUTT OFF. *sniffles it was all happyish in the other sequal wahhhhhhh but wow this is good ^__^ i tried writing a fanfic.. but i never finished plotting ahah
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Title: Hurry!!!
Reviewed By: Sesslover9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome, I hope that you will finish it really soon, I really want to read the ending.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I could say is Wow that is a good story you came up with. I hope you will coutinue on with the story about after they had the baby. That will be wonderful. And you can put Ayme in there to spice thing up or something like that. So update soon.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 15:28 CDT
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Yes, I am soo gald you updated this story, I love it. Kagome's daughter is so cute. But, one thing did bother me. I know it's late in the story, but I was wondering about Inuyasha's relationship with Ayame in the beginning. Did Inu really sleep with her, or had he just started dating her when Kagome came back. Cause if he went that far with her I wouldn't have taken him back so quickly like Kags did.
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:10 CDT
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It's nice to see you back. That last chapter was hilarious, with Inuyasha waiting for his kid to just pop out. Ewwww. There is one thing that is bothering me though. Inuyasha never broke up with Ayame. Not to mention we never found out how she took the news. To be honest I was really looking forward to Kagome purifying the little hussy for going out with a mated demon.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg love your story, I just found it today and couldn't stop reading. I look forward until your next update. Chanda
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Title: Danny Gir
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad your back, I missed you and this story she had a girl how cool and Inuyasha delivered. Good chapter. sorry about the writers block and your computer crashing but good writers always pervail..and you did. can't wait till next update
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic...poor kagome just couldent convence inuyasha. please update soon
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: dogdemonandkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter, can't wait for more, this is the best storie i have ever read, i really in joyed, i'm on the outside as well.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay an update! I am so excited!! I love your story!! I know what you mean about not having the time to write, and life getting in the way, and I hope all is going better. ^_^ Great update and looking forward to another one, just like always! much love anubis
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Title: As Always, Very Nyce!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 06:29 CST
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As always Lauren, Very nice! The dr. appt was very realistic & sweet. Can't wait for Kags to get some lovin ^_^
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wuz this story 2 peices. it has a great plot and everything and i didn't see any spelling mistakes. well keep writin. star555555528
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your right, it has been a while, and I'm glad you updated. This chapter was awesome. But I hope that your life gets better, and that you receive many rays of sunshine, lol. And I don't think it's a surprise your story eas nominated, it's a great story, and one of my favorites. I hope you update soon, and I LOVE YOUR STORY, LoL. ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 01:48 CST
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HHHHAAA! Rin is smart for her age.Huh! Now that;s werid Inuyasha not wantin to have sex. But that is very sweet that he is thinkin about the baby. He doing to make a great father.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg your story is so totally amazing. It was reall good to see or read that they are mated again. youshould totally keep writing chapters 4 this story. you are such a great writer. i simply loved the first one and so far the sequel is perfect. keep writing. post the next chapter asap please. star555555528 or Tiffany
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Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this chapter. please update soon.
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 12:14 CDT
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lol! that was great. Kagome rehearses her line and Inuyasha just happens to walk in at the same time. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Claps* yay!! I love this fic! I can't wait for more! It's so exciting!! ^_^ Great work!
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Title: knarly!
Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 21:37 CDT
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starting to sound way cool !
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