| "I'm Looking In" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: Rachiru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much. I was waiting for a little while for the sequel. I love how you write...I actually got angry and sad when I found out Inuyasha was with someone else . Oh keep writing . I have to say you are one of my favorite authors.
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYY! I love it keep writing gurl.
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Title: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: August 24, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you did have them break up but someone else did that, are you going to say who it was or have a mysterious figur say that? update and tell in the end of your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: rdsjr_1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i liked both stories so far and i cant wait for you to update......i really appreciate the good read
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Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: Drysdale On: August 24, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that "I'm looking in" are lyrics from outside being that im a staind fan myself, and i was reading the chapters and i instantly started to think of the lyrics to the new single from staind "Right Here" and i thought that song would go great wioth this story. I know you may not use my idea but i just thought it would be cool to see that song used.
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Title: I fought tears...
Reviewed By: KitCatKit On: August 24, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your first part of this story, it was creative and longed my to read more. Now, that all this has happened to Kagome, I fought the cold tears back. I barely cry, only at times when I have a right to cry. This was one of those. Please keep reveiwing! .-. Now... Later!
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Title: Can I get a woot woot?
Reviewed By: AimzyJ On: August 24, 2005 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know how much I love you right now? Like... THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS much, you lovely writer you! Btw, I think AimzyJ is a lame nickname, so from now on I'm going to be reviewing as Princess Lovely. Write on! That was a pretty heated kiss, you know... I sense some serious sexual tensiooooon...
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Title: lynzi
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated!!! but geez that was a twist, dang. poor kagz, but everythings gonna be alright, right?? RIGHT???? ahhhh no ones answering!! *curls into little ball repeteing,"it ok, it's all ok"* lol hehe sorry i had a truck load of sugar ;)
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Title: Im liking this
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im beginnig to like this except its weird cuz every fanfic author does that they always separate them y might i ask tsk tsk o well i think ur doing a good job but plz hurry up and make this right cuz u kno it gets annoying waiting for them to realize the obvious
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 08:51 CDT
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I lkie reading this I hope you up date soon.ppl
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Title: Fangirl is Here!!! :P
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...First off L, you brought tears to my eyes...how dare you! (heh) VERY original pairing...I didn't see that coming. But i'm SO hurt....obviously it's a set up..but who sabotaged it? Ayame herself? Kikyou? Somebody had to send the "Dear John" e-mail...or was it a guy who's hot for Kags? This is gonna be good, I already can tell -WOOT! Gimme lemonz or gimme death (by lemon if possible) Smooches -InuGrrrl
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Reviewed By: Lil_Kag [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 07:33 CDT
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I like very much and you are a quick updater I lake that even more. Congrats on your wonderful story. You have talent. GREAT
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Reviewed By: Jem46 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... So I started reading the other fic yesterday evening and it was amazing. I can't wait to read the sequel but there is one thing that kind of bothers me. Why didn't they talk while she was gone? They were so in love and I just seem to think that they would talk a lot and that this email would have been a problem at some point in time. Anyway- Love your work and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: phantomflame (too lazy to login -__-) On: August 24, 2005 02:17 CDT
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o.O Inuyasha and Kagome have problems... what did the email say? I wanna know *whines* tell me! anyway, I like the angsty beginning.
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Title: great storie
Reviewed By: dogdemonandkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it can't wait for you to update. this is the best storie i have every read same with i'm on the outside. I love them both so much.
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