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Reviewed By: Darks_lil_angel NSI On: January 16, 2006 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah another update!!! I'm so happy well keep this up and I might just have to start sneaking on the internet just read your story over and over! ^^ anyway we understand your pressure from school but don't give up where rootin for yah!! ^.~
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Title: Arigatou!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I wake up on my first day of vaction sick as a dog. $200 dollars worth of Dr's and meds, I get home to the BEST news all week. An update on this story! I know it's just a teaser, and you left us with a cliffy too; but it was a good teaser. I stayed up long enough to read it before collapsing in bronchial misery. Your running/pursuing scenes were excellent. I couldn't read fast enough to keep up with the action. I will wait, albeit impatiently, to find out how Max ended up without Naraku's form imbedded in his body. And if Shippou buys the farm or if he's alive. And why did he have the baby in the first place? Until then. -TK
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Title: yah! an update!
Reviewed By: Darks_lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! you updated but it's been a while so hurry up!! please? ^.^ anyway is Al a miko or something? cause she can see Max or maybe she's also a youkai or something? anyway upsate ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Niwa2015 On: November 28, 2005 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this goin pretty good but you should really hurry up and reveal why Al can see Max is she a miko or something? anyway great job!
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Title: yeah, updates!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang you, leaving us with a cliffy! As for Buyo...I'm sure it would be an honorable way for him to go, cut down in his prime by a 'better' fighter. Don't sweat it. Update was great, looking forward to the next one (and no you're NOT a moron). -TK
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Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 01:42 CST
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You updated :-) This keeps getting better, I am sorry for Buyo though. So he is Sesshomaru and who elses child for he seems full demon to me.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OM I love your story! I can't wait to read more!I absolutly love Al and Max, having Al make the comment about the cat and then having Max flip out was great I couldn't stop laughing. So I'm guessing, Al has Miko blood. And I have a feeling Max and Al are going to get knocked down the well which would give Max a chance to answer a lot of his questions. Well I really can't wait to read the next chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 22:36 CST
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Wow, this story rocks! I'm getting so interested in how Naraku's there, and Max's actual parentage... And is Al a miko? Oh, I can't wait! Update soon!
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Title: What an awesome story!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I gave you a 9 only because rarely you use words with wrong meanings, and you said you wanted constructive suggestions. Other than that, this is one awesome fic! I know you just updated, and I hate waiting, so I'm glad I found it tonight AFTER 6 chapters and not at chapter 1. One little minor thing, maybe I missed something, but If Max had been slogging through sewage, why didn't any of the people around him notice? Al's just wierd enough to not care, but there were other people around. Although I have to wonder how Al's dad is going to react to wretchedness all over his good couch. Hope it's leather! I'm definitely adding this to my fav's list. Enjoy the artwork too. I can't draw worth diddly, so it's amazing to see an awesome writer who can draw. Thanks for a good read, look forward to the next chap. -TK
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Title: OMFG!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Darks_lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare you stop right there!!!!!!!!!! are you mad?! do you know i almost had a heart attack when i reliezed that there weren't anymore chapters I mean really if your gonna right that god a story at least have the decance to leave it at a good end not that big drastic cliffie!! Ok seriously great job and would you please just tell the people that sesshy is the daddy and not Inuyasha at least i think it is anyway update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of confused, in the most recent chapter I thought it said that Max shredded 'Naraku's' arm in the sewer & then it says several times that he decapitated him/her, so did he take off his/her arm or head? If you're decapitated you've lost your head, I'm not sure what you are when you've lost your arm.
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Reviewed By: chesterzerousygirl On: October 02, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoohoooo!!! I so like this story! And i so like max. he's the bomb! Please continue!!!! Oh, and is he sessy's son?
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Reviewed By: omg On: August 28, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude come on he is having the same relationship with al as his father was and i know she saw him running around. Your readers are not stupid.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 26, 2005 11:55 CDT
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Wow, this is really good, can't wait to see more. Hope you update soon. Will Max ever show Al what he really is? The tail and the stripes makes me think his father is Sess, though why did he get left in the well?
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 24, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is off to a great start. The cake incident was hilarious. The ending leave you wondering just who is his father His actions are like one and the markings like another. It leaves a lot of questions that I am sure will be answered in future chapters. I really enjoyed this chapter and hope you update soon.
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