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| "Nikanaru" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 13:36 CST
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I'm a new reader, just discovered your story 2 days ago, haven't been able to stop reading it... Seriously, I really like the way this is written, and I love the whole original concept. You have a new fan. (On a side note, if Max/Nikanaru turns out to be the reincarnation of Inuyasha, I'm gonna be pissed. Cuz apparently kagome's still alive, and if he's her son then there's no romantic possibility without being really weird... and I am all about Inuyasha and Kagome making it somehow. Romantically, not mother/son, or friends, or anything else. But if that's the way this story goes, I'll have to accept it I suppose... :) Can't wait to find out what happens.)
| Title: WooHoo! An Update!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Favorite Quote: It might have been considered romantic if the circumstances were… completely and utterly different. How do you twist such a simple statement into such a vivid picture, with a laugh at the same time? Hey pal, we missed you. Glad you're back, and this story is going in a completely unpredictable direction. Well, I can make predictions, but you always prove me wrong. It's a hell of a trip, and I'm enjoying the scenery along the way. I haven't checked out the pics yet, but the update was great. Will wait calmly, but impatiently, for the next update. -TK PS, when describing what will happen if Al leaves Max's sight, you might want to check whether you meant Pleasant or Unpleasant. Kinda confusing for a second. Everything else was pitch perfect!
| Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 20:43 CDT
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This is a great story! It's interesting, different, and quite unusual... Though you seem to have turned Tokyo into New York in terms of culture... At chapter 10 I htink I've figured out who Max / Nikanaru's father is... Sesshoumaru! Duh, the crescent moon and the fluffy tail (though it's not a tail if you watch episode 37 again, you can see both sides of it are detached from Sesshoumaru) But I must say the ending to this chapter (chapter 10) really reminded me of the them song to Samurai Jack (I've been watching too much Toonami recently) "Samurai Jack, Samurai Jack, back to the past goes Samurai Jack."
| Title: Chapter
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 20:49 CDT
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This chapter was very funny, thank you for the humor. Even if you didn't think it was a good chapter, it was a great bridge between was and will be. The way Max suddenly realizes something is amiss, very visual! Thanks Koday! PS Golden Kitsune, I didn't mean to sound like you were reviewing for skin, please forgive. :-) PPS, Koday, who is the character you drew? What series? It was really cool! I love the fish.
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 14, 2006 17:42 CDT
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Right here and now I am saying that I am not just reviewing so I can see the naked picture, goodness, give me some credit. Believe it or not I actually like this fic, its funny and well thought out. And the pictures are good...just a bit clothed...I mean, uh....*runs away* No I joke. ^^
| Title: Nice Update Teaser
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 17:18 CDT
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Okay, so I was afraid to review after your 'tempt' to draw them 'nekkid.' You're drawing is good, I really enjoyed these pic's (especially the gun, it's a great gun...and Max's sword is downright nasty! Can't wait to find out how it works). So, I'm reviewing your awesome work, not because I'm looking for a skin pic. As long as we're clear on that...I really enjoyed your last chapter. Hang in there, keep writing in your spare time, and know we'll continue to read.
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 15:48 CDT
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This is really good! Why havent more people reviewed? Honestly.
| Reviewed By: Dyquem (NSI) On: April 23, 2006 05:49 CDT
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I just started reading it (through chapter 10) but am really enjoying it. I will never understand why some people get 120 reviews while others only have 20. Don't take the lack of reviews as a comment on your work. It seems obvious that Max is Kagome and Sesshoumaru's son, but you did say to expect the unexpected, so perhaps you have something else in mind. I've been anticipating a 'Darth Vader Luke Skywalker' moment there. Poor Buyo. Very sad, and how traumatic - to kill your pet cat.
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: April 21, 2006 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not so much action in this chapter but I liked it. I really can't wait to find out what happens next. I really want to know if Max's parents are still alive and is Kikyo going to to Max the truth of his family? Also Kikiyo seems nice in this story... most of the time I hate Kikyo and want nothing more then to see her die and stay dead (unlike the series). But you seem to being a nice job bringing her in as a nice character. SO I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
| Title: AWESOME!?!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I promise I've not been blinded, but this was a very good chapter. You've made much improvement over the last few months with proofing and grammer. I found two words that were spelled right, but not the right word (there they're, our are type); but overall, this was a tight story gramatically. Now that I've given the constructive, let's talk about the awesome! I laughed heartily three different times, the last sentence being the final one. I'm saddened that you aren't getting more reviews, but I have come to realize that there is an inverse proportion between how good a fic is and how many reviews a writer gets. That means you're doing a very good job. I liked seeing Al a little off her feet, she always seems so sure of herself, and the humor in this very serious chapter was witty and acerbic. I spent the last half hoping the body wasn't who I thought it was, you did that very well. Just enough foreshadowing and mystery to leave me hanging until the very last. Looking forward to your next update Koday! -TK
| Reviewed By: bk On: February 20, 2006 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is absolutely fantastic. Your doing a great job. I can't wait for your next update. Keep up the good work.
| Title: bwaa ha ha
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's the sound of someone laughing and crying at the same time. I will forever have in my mind a little kid puking on the stage while his brother stands up giving him a 'score' ovation. Meanwhile, I'm really glad you're going to shorter chapters because I can't stand the suspense. On a grammer standpoint, you got a ten! I only found one word, like Para. 3, that was missing a letter, but it made another word, so spell check wouldn't have caught it. I didn't re-read ch. 4, too much homework tonight; but I'm sure it improved as well. As always, I'm here reading, when you're done updating. -TK PS, Souta was totally terrifying in the pic. I had a good idea as to what a warewolf would look like.
| Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, completely unexpected, but you've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. I'll be here for Ch. 10 when life lets up long enough for you to write, or your muse keeps you up all night...whichever happens first. -TK Pros: As always, I enjoy the way Max had these internal dialogues with himself while in the midst of battle...so much like real life. Cons: Spell check missed a bunch this time. Might wanna review. "aslmost" near the beginning comes to mind first. Overall: You have a good strong story here, looking forward to next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Darks_lil_angel NSI On: January 16, 2006 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah another update!!! I'm so happy well keep this up and I might just have to start sneaking on the internet just read your story over and over! ^^ anyway we understand your pressure from school but don't give up where rootin for yah!! ^.~
| Title: Arigatou!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I wake up on my first day of vaction sick as a dog. $200 dollars worth of Dr's and meds, I get home to the BEST news all week. An update on this story! I know it's just a teaser, and you left us with a cliffy too; but it was a good teaser. I stayed up long enough to read it before collapsing in bronchial misery. Your running/pursuing scenes were excellent. I couldn't read fast enough to keep up with the action. I will wait, albeit impatiently, to find out how Max ended up without Naraku's form imbedded in his body. And if Shippou buys the farm or if he's alive. And why did he have the baby in the first place? Until then. -TK
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