| "Shippo and the Magic Wand" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 06:46 CST
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this is a great story and i really love it
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 09:51 CDT
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this was a great story
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Title: This story was awesome!
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alesyira, I love your works. "Only One Can Wander So Long," and "Shippo and the Magic Wand" prove your originality and creativity. This story especially; there isn't a lot of Shippo and Kagome based fanfiction out there, and I thank you for adding more to the population. I also want to thank you for not overdoing the whole Kagome-turns-into-something plot. It gets annoying after a while, but this story is still unique based on the plot. Usually the cliche authors always make Kagome uber powerful, she can kill Naraku in one hit or she's a kami/kitsune/genie/miko. There is so many of them, you just can't count them all. Also the humor and the just plain fun that is depicted from your writing. Sometimes its nice to read a story thats not about crazy smut and loads of violence. I'm sure writing in Shippo's POV was challenging, but you pulled it off beautifully. The image of Sesshomaru wearing socks just can't get out of my head. lol! But it also makes you wonder if Sesshomaru-sama does wear socks indeed? I am VERY looking forward to the sequel of this story. I'm a avid fan and lover of YYH/InuYasha crossovers. So if you write a crossover, I'll read it! Thanks again for writing this story for the enjoyment of readers. Until then, Ja ne! ^_~
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Reviewed By: KIdakakash On: July 24, 2006 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is ausom! Add more chapters!
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, wonderful work. I love 'One Can Only Wander For So Long' and this story just adds to the fact that I think you're a wonderful writer.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you were able to update. I was begining to think perhaps the story was abandoned. I can understand having puter problems tho. But I am really enjoying your story. So just update when you can.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: March 08, 2006 12:24 CST
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Why'd you stop? This was just getting interesting. Hope you continue
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Reviewed By: chiquita queen On: January 09, 2006 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my god when I read the part where Shippo asks if Sesshoumau wears socks, I almost spit my drink out all over the place. That whole scene with him morphed into Sesshoumaru was hilarious!
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously love this story and how it's evolved into something more than what it seems to have started out as. The only true critique I have is that Shippou seems to be narrating at an older age than what is depicted (with how he acts and speaks) with his speaking patterns and word choice. It sounds less juvenile and more refined than one would expect with a story told from Shippou's point of view. Granted, he isn't truly a child and might think in a more mature manner than he acts/speaks outwardly, but it does take some getting used to. But, of course, that's probably intentional on your part, so take what I say with a grain of salt. :D Again, fantastic story! :D Oh, and your drawing of Shippou is adorable, too!
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Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you are a great writer, keep up the goood work.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this was different. All things possable with a magic wand,lol.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh^^ On: September 01, 2005 19:39 CDT
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Yay! If I had a wand like that, I think I would transform something into an image of Kurama from Yu Yu Hakusho... I really don't care if it's just a physical illusion.
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