| "Forced Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemon...I admit im kinda embarrassed writing about it, but, I gotta admit it was good because I hate it when people go all hella detailed and like 'oh he spilled the seed' or somethng. its kinda weird, but I like your story. uhm what else can i say? UPDATE ASAFP OR ILL CALL ITACHI TO COME HUNT YOU DOWN!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very indept and interesting story. Your plot is exciting and you love to look deep inside each character which is great for the reader. I have read the whole story in a few days and noticed looking back that you don't update often. I am hoping to see a continuation of this story as it is really reviving up now and the read is anxious to get to the next installment. Best of luck with this story and I do very much hope you will not abandon the characters in their time of need! Kathy
|
Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!! ASAP!!!!! WHERE DID YOU GO SINCE APRIL???!!!!!!????????
|
Reviewed By: Kags101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Okay, here I ask you. Where have you been????!!! I swear, finding Sasu/Saku pairings is practically impossible on this site! I love your plotline, even if it consists of... Tayuya and Sasuke??? Makes me wonder what that is for... Well, you said this is a Sasu/Saku right? And that there is reasons behind why you put those two together.... .::squeal::. I can't wait for your other chapter, finally! Some fluff or action between the two pretties hmm? Just realized, since he's with Tayuya and all... He must have a thing for pink haired ladies... Or is that just a further reminder for Sakura? =P .::Squeal::. I swear, there are no words to describe how much I love this fic. You have amazing talent, may I borrow some? ^^
|
Reviewed By: Sakura123 On: July 05, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall very good story, although you are a bit wordy when it comes to the chapters so try to cut down on using so many words. I did enjoy reading it though and I hope your other chapters come out soon, but as I can see you must be taking much longer in order to finish them but please don't stop now its just getting good.
|
Title: O.M.GGG!!!
Reviewed By: Zamnandi On: July 01, 2006 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. I gave your writing style a 6 because you have the tendency to go back and restate a plot point several different ways, both within the same chapter and in the next one. It gets a little annoying sometimes. I gave you an 9 for spelling and grammar because it was just a couple of little things here and there that needed fixing - using "your" instead of "you're" and stuff like that. (By the way, I like to edit stuff like this in people's work, so if you would like to employ my services, I am more than available - zamnandi204@yahoo.com! :D )I gave you an 8 in creativity simply because I've seen many fanfics start from the platform yours did, and for a little while you fic was predictable. Then, I was proved most certainly wrong and it wasn't! Good job with that. All these factors combined to give you an Enjoyment factor of 9 in my opinion. 8 is the average of all those scores, so there you go! Overall, I really liked it. The plotline is compelling and interesting, especially your portrayal of Sasuke and of Tayuya's feelings for him. I like that you give the message "yes, the evil people are bad, but they are still people" and at the same time "just because bad people are people doesn't mean they shouldn't pay for what they've done". (At least that's what I got from it.) I particularly applaud the way you have brought Sasuke to life. There are so few writers that can even attempt to get inside his head or heart without making him sound emo or taking him out of character. In my opinion, you are one of them. Keep up the good work, and I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! Ciao ;) Zamnandi
|
Reviewed By: SesshouMarus Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where is convergence part II? It should be out by now....
|
Title: oooooooooooooo
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOHHHH really good story, love your take on things, I think it fits the characters more and your fitting them into more grownup scenarios that just aren't out there. Love it, just added you to my favorites, update soon. Oh! and this better be a sask/saku :)
|
Title: THE BEST
Reviewed By: Lena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this was great! I'M LOVING UR FIC! u have me on the edge of my seat, and this stuff really touches u, i can feel what the characters are feeling, and my god, let sasuke jump sakura or the other way around, it's like nails being dragged on a chalk bored!!!! it's a great fic! and i love how it's all complex with so many unwanted factors that all three have to deal with!! please update soon! this is the best Naturo fic i have read yet, i can hardly find any good ones!
|
Title: O_O
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAM! I just about got hit in the face with this fic!! It. Is. So. Awesome. Writing Style: EX-CEL-LENT! Luv the out of the blue tayuya/sasuke pairing.... really adds a twist! very intricate and complex and oh so cleverly woven plot... keep it up and update soon cause i'm dying without something to read -_____- BUT WHYYY IS MY SHIKA WITH TEMARI?! HE'S DESTINED FOR INO! *sob* (: update please thankee!!
|
Reviewed By: damn son! On: April 29, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i could id make the rating hire =( shit thats AWESOME tayuXnaru!!! omg omg omg LOVE IT!! keep it up man!!!! >_
|
Reviewed By: SSSASSSUUKKE lover On: April 11, 2006 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg you HAVE to keep writing, pleaseeee please do not abandon this fic, it is so good so touching, i nearly cried at over 5 of the parts... update! soon!
|
Reviewed By: Aery On: April 06, 2006 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
COOL!!! UPDATE DAMMIT!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wont cry... I wont cry... I wont... *sniffle* I love the angst! The drama! I absolutely adore this little story of yours! So very beautiful, and actually rather realistic as well. ...Did I mention I LOVED this? To find a SasuSaku fic is rare, indeed, but to find one as well-written and angst-ridden as your fic? Nary impossible, I tell you! Ah... I'm happy now. And I can't believe hardly anyone has praised you so far! Stupid creepy people drooling over NaruSasu... Honestly! Is it so alien to have a friendly rivalry without having to fuck each other?? I ask you!! >
|
Reviewed By: dallas email ghoonhamnsgal922@aol On: February 10, 2006 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please update soon pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
|
Title: DAMN! only goes up to 10!
Reviewed By: cockitpullit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent, absolutely awesome =D glad you finally UPDATED what happened to animespiral??? well keep it up make sure theres lots of sasuke x sakura ACTION! XD
|
Title: Damn You!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made me cry!!! Your story is so good!! *sniff* I-I... I can't-write...cause I.. *burst out crying* WAAAAAH!!! IT'S SO GOOD I LOVE ALL THE DRAMA THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ!!!! YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST TALENTED WRITTERS ON THE ENTIRE SITE *tears finally stop* Please continue to write, I am your devoted fan! *pixy wings sprout and flies away teary eyed* GOOD-BYE BY GREAT FELLOW WRITTER!
|
Reviewed By: cockitpullit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY MOTHER OF SOMETHING!! ur really goood at writing holy shit ur writing stle is awesome and u put a lot of detail into all the sasuke seens ^_^ HOLY SHIT UR JUST A GREAT WRITER!! plzzzzzz UPDATE I WILL DIE IF YOU DONT ahaha jk
|
Reviewed By: charity-nicole On: December 31, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!!!!!i loved this fan fic it i sone of the best ones that i have ever read!!! i swear that totally keep writing !!! i would love to keep reading what happens between sasuke and sakura after what he heard and saw them doing!! well good luck and keep writing!!!
|
Reviewed By: Ouka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 03:55 CST
Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! you have such talented writing skills, i can't believe my eyes! please update ASAP!
|
Reviewed By: Jadehaku On: December 15, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv your story, really draws the reader in. I wonder what sasuke is going to do now, cant wait for the next update^0^
|
Reviewed By: Bluedudeduh On: November 24, 2005 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fanfic thusfar. I kind of didn't like it for the pure fact im a Naruto fan, and the events unfolding during episodes 130 made me hate Sasuke with a passion. I haven't really seen many Fanfictions quite like this and it was fun to get even angrier at sasuke for this lol All in all you got a 10 for shoi
|
Reviewed By: rikie On: November 11, 2005 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
somehow i can't bear the fact that sasuke had "other" women besides sakura... *sigh* i hope u have a good reason why the story seems this way. waiting for the next one.
|
Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 23:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I still love it!!! Poor Sakura..torn between two great guys... XP Plz update!!! ^-^
|
Reviewed By: jennjennr On: November 10, 2005 15:18 CST
Comment/Review:
wow good awsome actually. please update soon. i really like the way this story is developing. i have nothing bad to say.
|
Reviewed By: golden_meliades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is great, I have really enjoyed the last hour, reading all of it. I hope you continue. I'll look for you on ff.net, see if you're there...it's easier to leave reviews. I really love how you show the inner thoughts and feelings with such insight. You make all three characters very easy to empathize with.
|
Reviewed By: golden_meliades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 16:00 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is great, I have really enjoyed the last hour, reading all of it. I hope you continue. I'll look for you on ff.net, see if you're there...it's easier to leave reviews. I really love how you show the inner thoughts and feelings with such insight. You make all three characters very easy to empathize with.
|
Reviewed By: Lain228 On: November 04, 2005 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally loved it! I've been trying to find a good story like that and I couldn't find very many. I'm glad I found your story. Please keep writing and update soon!
|
Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this storr!! U have to keep writing!!! plz!!! ^-^
|
Reviewed By: lilmiszthang5367 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE GOD DAMMIT!!!! lolz. good story!
|
