| "The Cruel Hands Of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: TwiLiteVixen (@ff.net) On: July 12, 2006 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a tallented author and i hope to see more chapters soon. (In this story and in your others...) Please continue to write and to grow in your abilities, for the far outstrip my own and it would be a shame to waste them. Oh, and before I forget... *squeels* FLUFFY-SAMA! *tackles/huggles Sesshomaru*
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: July 09, 2006 23:05 EDT
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OMG!! I LOVE IT!!! I cant wait to find out who the demon are. PLEAZE UPDATE SOON!!! ^-^
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.ne On: July 09, 2006 21:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. So Sesshomaru has showed up in Koenma's office. Update soon. Can't wait to read what Sesshomaru and the rest of the Youkai need with Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 10:48 EDT
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Gwaaaaaaaaaaaa, you updated! *mewl* Major love for the update. I'm glad I finally had the time to read it. So Kagome'sfrustrated over something. Maybe it was just random stress, or maybe it's some kind of foreshadowing? OH! And I bet I know who the youkai is! ^_^ I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Seiromancer On: July 05, 2006 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh oh, is it sesshoumaru who didn't take to being ignored??
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Reviewed By: kagome4hiei (nsi) On: July 05, 2006 18:15 EDT
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It's been awhile since you've updated and I'm glad you did it now!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. The story is great. If anything have Hiei/Kagome mate. I think of Koenma more as a brother figure. Update soon. Can't wait to read if it is Naraku in Inuyashas' mind and what he does to the rest of the Inu gang and how Hiei gets his revenge for what he did to Kagome.
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Title: more please
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more chapters. It is a very good story.
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 15:29 EDT
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Naked Hiei chest... Mmmm, how lucky that Kagome is... Of course, she really needs a little-- a lot-- of luck, especially in love, so yay for her. I'm glad I found your works again; they are such a wonderful read.
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Title: Majiin Yusuke
Reviewed By: Majiin Yusuke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 04:18 EDT
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Cool story though you should make it a Koenma/Kag/Hiei its a lot better because i don' wanna see Koenma get his heart broken and what better way, live it out as a three some, come on it would be awkward if they didn't all pair up
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Title: O_o
Reviewed By: shi-no-tenshi (NLI) On: April 11, 2006 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love, absoluty LOVE this story and im really surprised that you havent gotten more reviews than this. *pats your back* dont let it get you down, some just dont review. *kicks them in the ass* shame on them. Its so well written, there arnt many out there and your one of my top favorite writers out there. love the paring, VERY original. If i could, i would give you more than i 10 rateing, you diserve it! Anyways, i love the story, *licks screen* You take you time updating, just dont take to long. I love my hair and i would hate to start pulling it out, ^_~. ohh, and before i forget, you portray Hiei perfectly, you get some cookies for that one. *hands plate of cookies*
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 07, 2006 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pairings in the story are new to me. I never thought that a hiei/kag/koenma pairing would be a good one. I really like this story, so PLEASE keep updating! I really want to know what happens next.
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Title: Chapter Ten
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 16:11 EST
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Those memories would have to be well hidden for the Jagan to have missed them the first time it ventured into her mind. Perhaps she had locked them away, unwilling to bring them to light until Koenma had made mention of it. Now that Hiei knows about them, and exactly why she was taken it would not surprise me if he did some searching of his own to see if Inuyasha was still alive to exact some form of retribution for her. I could see it happening somehow, though I must admit I am hoping for more interaction between him and Kagome. I think they are finally starting to come to terms with what has happened and that is all to the good. I do hope you work more on this soon, I must say this is my favorite of your stories so far. There are so many questions I still have, I can't wait to find out the answers.
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Title: Chapter Nine
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 16:00 EST
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This chapter leads me to question why Naraku would kidnap her, torture her and then release her. Perhaps it was because she hadn't found all of the other jewel shards yet and he knew she would refuse to work with him. Or maybe there is another hidden reason that we just aren't aware of yet. I'm also wondering if Koenma is going to look into the Reikai files on Naraku. If he was killed, they would have some record on him and he would probably be thinking there is some punishment he could exact on the hanyou for torturing Kagome. But since he is still "alive" so to speak in Inuyasha (at least I think that's what happened) Koenma would realize that they don't have his soul in containment and that would alert him to the fact Kagome could be in even more danger. It would give him (and Hiei if the apparition would make an appearance) more reason to stay near her or even perhaps move her into the Reikai for protection.
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Title: Chapter Eight
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 15:50 EST
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Enma is taking this far better than I ever expected. If anyone could outdo Hiei in his dislike of the situation I was thinking it would be him since he despises demons so thoroughly. Most likely the only reason he is not having a complete fit over it is 1.) The jewel chose them, there isn't anything he could do about it short of killing Hiei. and 2.) Koenma is there to help keep him in line. I am still curious on what his thoughts are though, the possibility of Hiei in possession of such a powerful artifact. It was considerate of Koenma to send Botan to speak with Kagome to forstall any problems with his tardiness. Good work
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