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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story is sweeet you have to update soon can't wait till next chapter
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Title: not about the story
Reviewed By: roanae On: October 12, 2005 21:04 CDT
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do you know what happened to the A Single Spark site because now i can't get on it and don't know why and its driving me crazy. please email me back-bapfeb27@msn.com
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 16:27 CDT
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Actually i meant do Toga and mrs H know about sess trying to kill kagome, and how they will both take this information. i can actually see mrs. H. facing down the great lord sesshoumaru for daring to hurt her little girl. it would be a great scene. lol luvs ya
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Reviewed By: INUKAGLOVER, On: October 11, 2005 12:22 CDT
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OOOOOHHH!!! I'm sensing a Toga/Kagome's mother relationship emerging!! I've only seen one of those before and loved every inch of it!! Anywho, just a thought!! Anyways, LOVE your story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: gb On: October 10, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!!! kagome gets to see her momma!!! i'm so glad. i was so sad about that.. maybe toga and her mom could get married and then they will be a family.. and them souta would have two brothers i know it's your story.. but i am just thinging out loud.. =).. i love what ever you write!! =)
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 09, 2005 22:04 CDT
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awwww. Are kagome's family gonna be staying on with her now??? And what's gonna happen to her grandfather. Does her mother know what sess has done to kagome, and how is she gonna feel about facing him with this knowledge. better yet what will toga do when he finds out? i know read to find out.
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Reviewed By: Ballofflame On: October 09, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wolf-I've got to say, these last two chapters have been *amazing*! I've read some great insight from the characters-like Koga consouling Shippo when his real dad left, and his dad's compassion and happiness for Shippo's sake. Not to mention Inuyasha's un-surprise of GPA H's treatment of Kagome, as well as why he thought GPA H. did that. Although, I can't wait to see Souta and Kohaku interact; something tells me that those two would get along better than most would suspect. And I certinly hope that Toga gets to know exactly how tense interaction with Sess. and Inuyasha can be, as well as how much Inuyasha relies on Sango, Miroku, and Koga, seeing as how Toga already realizes how much his son relies on Kagome. PS-This doesn't really belong here, but I had to say it: I'm glad I was able to make you think of questions you didn't ask. You certinaly didn't have to dedicate a chapter to me, but thank you anyway.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Bree01 On: October 09, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved what you have done with this fic. It's amazing all these incredible detail you've added to the original story line, in a way that makes everything fit. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 02:48 CDT
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oh!! i love this little story!! :) you did such a good job writing it! xD and let me tell you, that lemon you wrote got me heated up a bit...:P the dialogue was HOT! i know it wasn't that descriptive, and didn't go all the way..but the dialogue....nice job! can't wait to see what you do with a full length lemon! xD and you had me tearing up more than a few times as i was reading! i absolute adore this! please please continue and write more! xD
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Title: keyword...
Reviewed By: mimiy14 On: September 23, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u know.. i cant wiat for more.... please update... i cant belive grandpa huragishi! how rude! ... i want kags to be... well i dont know... ill shh... *looks around franticly and hides behind boyfriend*shhhh!.....
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 22, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again w/ the crying. hehe =) wow that was really harsh! i wonder though is it because her grandpa is always trying to purify inuyasha, that he threw her out?.. you know had her mom been thier would her mom let that happen? =) great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Chaos On: September 22, 2005 08:56 CDT
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*slaps a new sign over a booth in the village selling farm tools* Get your angry mob supplies! Inuyasha better beat the shit out of the old man, followed by Sess and then Toga, then Sango, then Miroku, followed by all of us getting a wack.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: September 21, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*steam comes out of ears* I want to to kick 'Grampa' in the nuts!!!!!!
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Title: pass the tissue please
Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 21, 2005 17:05 CDT
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I WAS doing fine. right up to the last part. and then i started to cry again. thanks for that:) I was just wondering though what Kagome's grandfather is going to tell the rest of her family, if anything at all. and then there is of course Inuyasha's responce to what happened. It's understandable the reactions of those who returned to the living, not being able to stay with those they knew and loved, or to join with the humans that are part of the village. Shippo's Father has I belive the hardest part. excepting the fact that his son now has new parents, and exactly how to deal with that. I hope that with time (but not to much of it) he will also start being another father figure to shippo, and at least teach him what he needs to know in order to gain the full strength of his powers. thanks for another great chapter. luvs ya. And thank you for adding me to your site once again....even more tears on that one:)
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Reviewed By: Ballofflame On: September 19, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Several things have stood out about this story that have promted me to review. The first is that the idea behind this story-where Kagome loses her memory after making her wish-while not oringinal,is handled in an oringinal way, and I applaud you for that. I can't think of another story that has Kagome lose her memory because of the wish while still in the past, and I do like seeing her reactions. That said, I do feel as though parts of the story have been rushed. One part in particular is how Inuyasha forgives his father and brother for past actions (or, in his father's case, what he thought were past actions)-it felt as though the forgiveness happened way too fast. It also felt as though Kagome remembered too soon as well-I really was looking forward to more angst. I do like how you've written the characters however-if they were real, I can easily see Inuyasha forgiving his brother and father, as well as Kagome remembering why the wish was made when she sees Kikyou. One thing that I'm hoping to see more of is Shippo's father-you introduced him, but since then, he hasn't interacted at all with the rest of the group, while Toga has. It seems as though he's been forgotten, although I could easily see him getting angry at Inuyasha's casual acceptence of Shippo as his 'pup', and trying to gain (or even, to some extent, re-gain) Shippo's respect, as well as feeling as though he has to compete for Shippo's love. I would also like to see how the wish affected Sango and Miroku |
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