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Title: no need for a one-shot
Reviewed By: habby On: September 19, 2005 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this to good a start to make it a one-shot. please please please don't stop when its going so well. but then again don't push yourself too much. but still that doesn't mean i'm saying stop. just do your best, ok. PS: i'm really loving this one. i don't think that many people would have come up with this.
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 19, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok.. so i so now i know.. um you are not done w/ this story are you?.. i hope not. it's so great!!!=)
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Title: bravo!!!
Reviewed By: gb On: September 19, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!! no fair =(.. so does he want it to be permenent?.. ok.. well i loved it!!! and i will wiat for more promise!!! =)
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Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and I even added you to my favorite story list, and I am very picky with who I choose. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 19, 2005 08:06 CDT
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i knew that temper would be there somewhere. thank you. great chapter, and a hint of lime. loved it. when is kagome gonna tell about the fights between the brothers or does toga already know about that? luvs ya
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Reviewed By: mimiy14 On: September 18, 2005 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 18, 2005 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool...but i still say that toga should have lost his temper, just a little bit. anyway great chapter, i'm just glad that your updating again, was starting to think you forgot about your stories....lol.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: gb On: September 15, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think thing that i love most of all, from all of your stories is the sance of family. as different from any thing else any one may know, they have all become a family of sorts, and you tell it so very beautifully!!! bravo! =)
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Title: where are the tissues???
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 02:00 CDT
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geez just when i think things couldn't get worse, you go ahead and play with fate...lol...so how bad does everyone get in shit from toga anyway. and well you let him go to her in her time? more please......
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Title: Sacrifice
Reviewed By: Kaitlyn Nichols On: September 14, 2005 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a really great story.. There are not many other stories that have Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's father in them. It almost gives the story a more real effect. Please keep updating this story and all of your other ones. THANK YOU FOR ALL OF THE ENJOYMENT AND PRIVELAGE OF READING YOUR STORIES.. KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WRITING IT WILL TAKE YOU MANY PLACES!!!!!
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 11, 2005 22:59 CDT
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What are you doing now girl. just when i start thinking that people can't come up with worse memeories for inuyasha, SOMEONE comes around with something worse. but i still loved it. keep it up...
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This chapter was very good though I am dying to know what Sesshomaru has figured out. Maybe I'm dense since I haven't yet, but oh well. Keep up the good work and I eagerly awaut your next update.
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 20:31 CDT
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How sweet, you brought back Toga(are you calling him that here?) wonder what kags is going to do when face to face with fluffy. by the way your forgiven!
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Title: bigxnut@yaoo.com
Reviewed By: gb On: September 10, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it's like they say " you don't know waht you have til it's gone" so let's hope they can now appritiate what it is that kagome is for them. especialy inuyasha. great story! and i am awaiting further chapters happily =)..
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Reviewed By: inufan625(nsi) On: September 10, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm really enjoying this. I hope you can keepu up with the regular updates and I would be lyig if I didn't say I was really anxious to see if the inu-papa rumor is truE and how IY is going to react if it is and he finally gets to meet his father. Also the changes in Sessh should be interesting as well.
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