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| "Welcome to The Age of Un-Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2012 05:00 EST
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Simply Heartbreaking :| | Title: Dead?
Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 04:49 EDT
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Are you ever gonna update ... :'( | Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 05:34 EDT
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hey..you said you'd update... *waiting*
| Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 04:51 EDT
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When are you gonna update???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? still waiting!!!
| Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: September 20, 2008 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeee I love this story!!! I totally hope that kikyou doesnt die but at the same time well ya know...I think its funny that Kagome is all like omg when they come in!!! Please update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 05:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... its been so long when I last read this that I had to read it all over again to see what was up... And its still good the second time around too..... Im glad that Kagome gets to see Inuyasha again and same for Inuyasha to see her... Funny how Kikyo is about to die and all he can think about was Kagome...(smirks) I just had to laugh at that part... Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace....
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story! So much action and drama, I love it :) ~Amber
| Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 15:53 EDT
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Okay, totally in love with this story! And I would like to offer my services as grammar and spelling beta. I'm quite good at those things. So yeah, keep writing! I love it!
| Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I found it the other day and read it all in one shot. I'm so glad you revived it, and are still going with it even after so long. It really is such an awesome story. Can't wait to see what happens next! Do they escape the city down to MIT and add Sango to their motley crew? What about Shippo? Can't wait to see!
| Title: update...
Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 23:20 EST
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its been like a whole year!!! When are you gonna update!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 21:00 EST
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Great update! Haha, yea I wouldn't want to wear a Pokemon hat either, but you gotta do what ya gotta do. I hope nothing too bad happened to Miroku...poor guy! Well as always great job and keep up the very interesting chapters, can't wait for more. Update soon! =)
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 06:48 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was wondering when you where going to update, but at least you did and not just stop writing completly. I hate when authors do that and leave you hangin'. Well hope you had a good holiday and hope you update. Peace.
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 05:01 EST
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wow... I just pulled an all-nighter reading the entire fic up to the current chapter(18) @_@ i was planning on sleeping a few hours ago but i kept needing to see what would happen next T_T its 6AM and my alarm is set for 630, I wont wake up for that lol and then ill be late for work I can handle working 8 hours after working 7 then not sleeping lol that just goes to show how captivating I found your fic, that and im INSANE! : D update soon! Kags and Inu need to make up, and Miroku needs to be un-happened-to
| Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so awlsome please continue
| Title: Wonderful and delicious!
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just sat down and read this entire fanfic over the course of my free time in the past two days, and I only have praise and compliments for it. The characterizations and relationships between the characters are superb. The only character I have trouble with is Kagome's mom, who is such a nice person in the anime and and manga that I don't really like seeing her portrayed as anything short of perfect. But I can understand why your specific characterization is necessary for the plot line of this fanfic. I enjoy the setting, especially the amount of research that you have put into properly portraying the city of Tokyo. I think that maybe InuYasha and Kagome should have fought a bit more before they gave in and fell in love, but I like everything else about the course of their romance. I feel attunded to the characters, and I especially appreciate the skill that you exhibit in using different viewpoints and back-too-back descriptions of what is going on in different places. I also enjoyed the attention to details and the jokes - sooooo funny that it almost killed me half of the time. Reading this fic made me feel really, really sorry for Souta - usually he is the child, the one who still has a silly, fun-loving outlook on life, but in this fic, he is the one with all of the stress and responsibility, rather than Kagome, who generally bears the brunt of the stress of a hectic life. In terms of the general plotline and development: the story follows a classic story cycle, but is written in an engaging manner, so that even if I already can forsee what is going to happen, I want to read it to enjoy the quality of the writing, not just to confirm plot points that I had already suspected. Things don't happen too quickly, which is a good thing in my book. Far too many fanfics that I have read rush from point to point without time to breathe or discern the difference between the events, but your fic does not fall into this pit, for which I am eternally grateful. I, myself, often make the mistake of wanting to say something so much that I forget to elaborate on the previous event at all. In terms of grammar and punctuation, you sometimes suffered small slip-ups (such as using they're for their or leaving out an article), but on the whole, it was pretty good. I'm not sure if you're into beta-reading, but if you need someone to check your grammar, I can make some recommendations. This is just friendly advice, by the way, and I mean no insult. Anyhow . . . there are a few details that I would be interested in seeing integrated into the body of the fic, if possible, like 1) How exactly Rin and Sesshomaru met (I bet it's a cute story!) 2) Whether InuYasha and Sesshomaru dye their hair or it's a genetic throwback (does their dad have silver hair and golden eyes too?) 3) Is there going to be a Miroku/Sango love interest story in this fic? Just some ideas for you to think about - I love it when people help me to stimulate my muse, so I always try to help others with my input and ideas. By the way, if you get a minute, check out my fanfic, "The End of Innocence", if you don't mind a bit of violence in the beginning of a story. Whew! Glad I'm done with the utterly shameless self-promotion. To sum it all up, you have a great fanfic here, I like it a lot, and I'm going to look you up right now and see if you have written anything else because I will read it right away, as soon as I can! You are certainly on my hit favorites list, which only has about twenty fics on it that I check up on every day to see if they have been updated. Anyhow, thanks a lot for giving me this fic to read (and entertain myself when I become bored with my homework!). I can't think of anything else to say, really, but I want to make this review take up the full 4000 words, so I promise to keep on rambling until I attain this goal! You've probably never recieved a review this long, but I make a point to always write as much as I can. :) :) :) :)
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