Title: o.o
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was... confusing. It seemed more like a role-play-game-thing rather than a story. It reminds me of how the characters acted in the 1st volume, is that when it's set? Great idea, with more imagry and, well-- plot I'm sure that it will come together nicely. Keep trying.
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