| "Kagome's Mom's Date" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Whatever... On: January 19, 2006 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Your story is great! I was just wondering what KONGOUSOUHA! means. Is it some new attack that Tetsusaiga learns or did you make it up? Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Angel~~ On: January 09, 2006 03:52 CST
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i really like this story please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Fire On: December 17, 2005 02:30 CST
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That was a great chapter. I hope you update really soon. Keep writing i lov your storys
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Reviewed By: vbollman(nsi) On: November 09, 2005 22:12 CST
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I am not reading this chapter. but that's only becasue i edited it. liked it anyway. luvs ya
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 20:16 CST
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ya know. if people wouldn't bug me when i'm reading. i'd be able to review faster. so far i like. depends though on what the other chapters are about. lol. it will do wench, it will do.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahaha... i love it. future sesshy is wonderful... though i didn't think he would ever go into retirement, and to think he woudl hide all that wonderfull hair from us... it makes me want to cry! but i love it anyway, thanks for the great story!
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Title: me likey
Reviewed By: lopersweet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i didn't hate it but you can do better anyways this chapter is only the second one so i can't expect for you to jump to the action so this chapter was good but i only expect it to get better from here on in so please don't disappoint me much luck lopersweet By the way your welcome and have great grammar un like some people (me)
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Title: Legend
Reviewed By: Legend On: September 04, 2005 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. You did better on the grammer and spelling. lol. I love the cliffies you leave. It makes me want you to write the next one. lol. So hurry up and getting writing. lol. jk. Take your time so you can make good quality ones.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: lopersweet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely done i was skeptical at first but it was good please continue soon. I like the way you don't betray the true actrions of the character. YOU HAD BETTER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK or you'll be hearing form me lol
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