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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: WCInsane - velvet_chains@hotmail.com On: December 04, 2007 21:50 CST
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I remember reading this and was so happy to find it again, but I noticed that it says complete, does this mean that you won't be writing anymore of it or are you posting it to a different site? I really like this and would like to read more plz.
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Reviewed By: WCInsane On: July 10, 2007 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me see...explain my choice...well...first off its comepletely awesome, and I'm very glad that it was updated recently. I've read it before and was so wanting more of it. The only thing that brought it down was the placement of some of the words and the sentence structure and tenses. Other then that it totally rocked my knee socks.
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Reviewed By: Mrs.t On: March 18, 2007 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really good. I like the setting and it is a really original story. Its also very amusing at some parts which is really good. Im glad that Trowa was accepted ok and that he's happy. I cant wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
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Title: Wonderful work!!
Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: March 14, 2007 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the world you've created here. it very interesting and i absolutely look foward to reading more about it. it been a while since i've read a gw fivesome that wasn't a pure smut or a one-shot. see ya next time.
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Reviewed By: bb On: March 07, 2007 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeay! Finally an update. I love this fic. It's been years. LOL! I am so happy for Trowa! Duo is just to cheeky and I am glad that Quatre did not resent Trowa for being the third. I wish that you can update this story soon because it has plenty of original content. *^_^*
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Title: I'd Like to be Your Beta!
Reviewed By: Cocao Lee On: March 05, 2007 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story has a lot of potential, and I am really excited to see where it's leading! However, the excessive amount of mistakes in both grammar and spelling are alarming and highly distracting to the reader; they take away from your story, and I believe that if they were properly corrected, your story could be amazing--even powerful! I'd like to beta your story. I hope you consider my offer carefully--here's a brief resume (lol) for you to glance over: As all betas should be, I am a whiz at Enlgish, but what's more--and honestly, this is more important than being good at English, and people don't acquire this trait from ANY classroom (well, except for the classroom of the internet)--I know what WORKS in fanfiction. I have been reading fanfiction for seven years (and then some, lol) and I have seen the greats, the worsts, the uglies and the beautifuls and I know what pathos-invoking methods and writing styles in general truly work when authors attempt to engage the readers of the fanfiction realm. One has to understand that when writing for the fanfiction-ers, they are writing for readers who look for excitement, intensity and emotion-evoking pieces that are quick, regularly updated and worthwhile. Tips like these are just the tip of the iceberg when it comes to the vast amount of information, hints and helpful points I can tell you to make your story really attract the readers and make an impact on the fanfiction society. Contact me soon! ^_^ My e-mail is cherryflavorgirl@gmail.com and my SN (on AIM) is falliblefortunes. Have a nice day! Cocoa
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Title: You're back
Reviewed By: shadowdragon58 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 08:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see a new chapter posted on aff however can't remember my login in order to post a review so you get one here. Great job on the new chapter I had been wondering how Trowa would be received. I am glad to see you are writing again this is one of my favorite stories and i can't wait to see more of it. I hope life goes a little slower and enables you to do that. Thanks for the update
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Reviewed By: list On: March 03, 2007 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, sad but full of hope... I hope for the next chapter soon ^^
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very interesting story and I hope you continue it. I'm really looking forward to Trowa's reintroduction to Heero's life after 2000 years. I'm fascinated with you creation of half breeds in this story and how Heero is ending up with four husbands. He's obviously going to be the ones supporting them but I'd like to know more about how their roles are going to work. I also want to know about the individual characters, their personalities truely add a lot of flavor to this story. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 05:52 CST
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I enjoyed reading your story very much and hope to get some more of it to read soon. :)
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: shadowdragon58 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 23:14 CST
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Excellent story I can't wait to meet Trowa. I would rate more but I can't remember if 10 is good or bad here any more. Please update soon though I want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Sakiku (too lazy to log in) On: October 31, 2005 15:59 CST
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Wow, this is an excellent plot-line! I like your society of Astaris (sorry if I misspellt them), and the way they are interacting. I especially like the interactions between Heero and the Council (talk about more or less open hatred!); they are wonderfully balanced between the council's contempt of Heero as an exile and Heero's grudging obeisance to whatever the Council tells him. I also love your interpretation of Heero's character, especially after the 2000+ years he has spent as an exile with all those stupid rules constricting him (I hope you'll give some insights into them in the next chapter). And, I'm burning to see what Heero can do with his magic (I guess he's not only limited to making entertaining fireworks as 'court sorcerer', is he?) and some more about his background, just why he has blown up that many people (yes, after being whipped with that thing I can understand a little bit insanity, but why was he there in the first place?). The only thing I wanted to mention is that you have some strange A with an ^on top of them in your formatting. Oh, and I'm burning to hear more about Duo and Co (and what the hell the Council was thinking giving 3 of the strongest deltas to the exile alpha! Ok, all 3 of them have some flaws, but is that reason enough that noone wants them?).I bet Wufei packs a mean punch, doesn't he? And Shinigami rocks (oh, could you please explain some more about how a God happens to take residence in an Astari?)! ~~Sakiku~~
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Reviewed By: Kreless On: October 19, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, keep it up!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: vampire of night [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this plot line. it so good and cool. i just love wufei. i cant wait for the next one or two chapter. i am so adding u to my favorites list. so good.
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, i love this story.....it is such an enthralling story...i printed it out and read it at school and then shared it with my friends and we all want you to write more....pleeeeeease*puppy dog face with big eyes* love it...keep writing
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