| "The Affairs" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: lavy On: January 15, 2006 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maa!! I don't like the ending :( but hehehe, nice fic anyway. hope you can write more about neji and hinata. =D
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Reviewed By: lavy On: January 15, 2006 03:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I like it so far. I thought it will be truely nejiten pairing also. But glad when find out it's not really nejiten fic. ^^ I only support for Nejihina pairing!! Anyway, Keep writing, I will put this fic as my fav one too :)
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Title: The Affairs
Reviewed By: mellyd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I really enjoy the story's plot and the atmosphere the author is creating. I hope you continue the story it's very cute. However having someone help with the grammer would make the fic 100% better because the grammer just makes it really hard to read. But please do continue.
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