| "My Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 20:32 CDT
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Beautiful, amazing, wonderful story
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 03:42 CDT
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Wonderful ending. I'm glad they are so happy together.
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Reviewed By: MsKittyKyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait to read the last chapter. Hope you get it up soon.
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Reviewed By: hi On: April 19, 2006 16:18 CDT
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this is not ch 18
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey the story. nice job!
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Reviewed By: Chitoko Kanzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMR!! I am _SO_ glade that I found this here.... I was neck deep in a phcotic episode over this when adultfanfiction went down _AGAIN_! Now I can read it here. I gave you all 10s cose I lurve this story to death, and I can't spell worth a damn so I wouldn't be able to catch a simple mistake anyways. I've just spoiled the endig on acedent but I'm gonna act like I didn't see it or the reviews about the ending. Much love and devotion- (yes this is the same Chitoko Kanzaki from adultfan) -this is Kanzaki, out! ^_~
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: March 27, 2006 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for the updates, yay for saving Ryou, yay for the death/torture of evil people, and yay for the wedding! hehe. ^^ lol. But anyways, their vows were beautiful, the wedding was beautiful, and the ring was beautiful. Gee, I seem to be repeating myself too much. lol. Your guys' writing never ceases to amaze me. Well written story, lovely plot, and I take it that there's about one ch left? I'm looking forward to reading it, whenever it is. ^^ Til then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 08:52 CST
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That was great. The wedding vows were beautiful. I like Ryou's father and I love what Yami did to try to make up with Seto. Great chapters, I love it.
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Reviewed By: kuramaandhiei4ever (not logged in) On: March 22, 2006 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very dramatic. I never get tired out reading your fics. Can't wait for the next and prolly last chapter :)
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 02:33 CST
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Good chapter. I feel so bad for Ryou and Seto nothing seems to go right for them. I hope they don't hurt Mokuba or Ryou or they will be very dead. Although, they probably will be any way when Bakura and the Istars get them.
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Title: or KuraMagicianGirl (also NLI)
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (NLI) On: January 21, 2006 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My Ra, that's not good, evil bastard must die if he hurts either of them! *glares* That ch was probably one of the more rare moments of lots of fun and humor until something happens. I knew it was too good for it to last. Ah well, I loved the ch anyways, as always. ^^ You guys are awesome at writing this story and the drama. And uh by the way, I've been reviewing/reading this story off on aff.net, so I just wanted to tell you that if you didn't know. Well, til the next ch, wherever it is I'm reading it. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever (not logged in) On: January 19, 2006 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's like christmas came again!!! :D 5 chapters?!?!?! And then left with that nailbiting cliffhanger?! I loved the engagement party and how you write a lot of romantic and funny in with the angst. Loveitloveitloveit. Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I can't beleive Seto's men failed to get Toma. This is so exciting. Ryou was so cute when Seto proposed. They got Mokuba and Ryou again Damn let's just get them good.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Seto! Get that sucker Toma. I can't beleive he threatened Mokuba. Someone needs to teach Kyo a lesson too. Great chpater. I can't wait to see Ryou's raction to all this.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good I guess they won't get any peace for a while.
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