| "Standing the Test of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: -CRIES-
Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The storys not over is it???? OMG this was so sad...it literally made me cry! ;-; How can fate be so cruel, please tell me thats not the end and it'll have a happy ending...-sniffles- really great story though I just wish it was happier. you got 9s on the the enjoyment factor and overall because it was so sad, sorry I was hoping for a happy bit there at the end of chapter 12.
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: sunstreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for the review, I take all reviews into consideration when moving onto my next chapter, but all I ask for when you're reviewing is a little punctuation, please. Sentences that are bound together, w/out punctuation, hurts my eyes. @_@
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Title: :'((boehoe
Reviewed By: dark_love On: September 01, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think its a cool story but i did not like to read it it was way to sad more happyness pleas!!
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