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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say...this story is GREAT! That was wonderful! I kept re-reading it over and over again! It was reallly goooddd. I'm wondering if yur done with the whole thing because I would like to know how the others and Inuyasha feels with the outcome. But this is great and its wonderful and I really, really, LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 19:22 CDT
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I really liked this story. You took what some might see as rape and turned it into something completely different and that I think is very possible. The writing was excellent. It was very different from the yaoi in one very noticeable fashion. In the yaoi story, you would say something to the effect, 'Inuyasha insterted his penis'. You didn't do that in this story and it is much better for that. What made you change your method? Anywho, this was very intense and you managed to keep Sesshoumaru in character and that is so difficult to do. The private scenes of him sharing his emotions were so sweet, and his kneeling in front of Kagome was extremely romantic. Le sigh. Oooh, I could have kicked Jakken. There is so much in the story that I could comment on, but it would take up a lot of room. I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation in which Rin and Jakken return and Kagome is able to see Inuyasha again and read his thoughts. It would be nice to see Kagome's feelings for Sesshoumaru grow deeper, and to see her powers expand. Can I say again how I love the way Sesshoumaru exposes himself in the bedroom. I appreciate the contrasts you paint. I have to run. Lovely, lovely story. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Anna333 On: May 10, 2006 04:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first of im gunna say this i have read alot of storys with a kagome and a sesshomaru pairing and not one of them has ever come close to how i pictured sesshomaru being with kagome...What i mean is he was not to lovey dovey or to ruff in how he was with her. Your story is what i have been looking for all this time in the sesshomaru kagome pairings anyways because i love them all kag/inu kag/sess or kag/sess/inu they are the pairings i love the most. And i dont write alot of reviews but i had to let u know this because I only write a review to a author i believe has real talent for storys. I know many people have talent that come on here dont get me wrong i love all the storys i read but there are sertain storys i am compeld to write a review to. You should continue writing more storys or continue this one cuz i would be curious how it would turn out. Right now i cant remember my pass to my space on here so if u could let me know in an email if u are writing a new story or if u have some out already i would be delited to read them. My email is Cherry_goddes68@hotmail.com i really enjoyed your story so please if you could i hope u email me leting me know.
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Title: The Prize
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Keep typing!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 09:25 CST
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This is my favortie fan fic w/ Kags And sess keep going or my sake please and coem read my fic its called Cuz it is!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: November 27, 2005 04:42 CST
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This was a great lemon story...full of want, need, desires, and sex...there is also a potential for a second story...maybe Kagome talking/meeting with Inuyasha after Sess taking her...maybe a story of Kagome learning to not delve too deeply into someones mind since she can read them now...Kagome and Sess's relationship out of the bed and hot springs...there is so much potential here...I hope you see it and hope that you explore it further...I do so love Inuyasha and have always had this love hate relationshi with Inuyasha and Kikyo...always feeling sorry for Kagome...this was a nice story...Kagome finally getting the love that she deserved even though it was not with Inuyasha....catti....
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Title: The Prize - all of it!
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was terrific!! I loved the characterizations, and the completely unexpected reactions of Sesshoumaru to Kagome, and vice versa. The plot was unique, even among Sess/Kag fics, and -despite the obviously necessary OOC-ness in later chapters- quite believable. The hentai scenes were quite well done and imaginative indeed ... in fact, I don't think I've read another fic that had this level of detail without descending into the realm of 'smutty.' Overall, I think you should be quite proud of yourself - and I sincerely hope that you will continue to write fics of this sort in this genre. Frankly, I think that, if you wished, you could have QUITE the career as a writer!!! Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable evening's entertainment! Wiccan :-)
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Reviewed By: Tara Hall On: November 23, 2005 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I would love to answer at least some of your questions - so without further ado… My favorite part of the story started in ch6 "His mask was definitely on but she could have sworn that there was longing in his sight." And it ends in ch7 right here, "He brought her to him in a desperate hug and buried his face right between her breasts." Have you read the story Demon's Night by Vanvliet? There's a line in the 3rd? ch a lot like it, "He'd wanted to drop to his knees, and bury his face in her warm female flesh and beg her to hold him…" I guess I'm a sucker for angst and what is angstier than unrequited love? For me, the part where she first told him that she didn't think she would be able to replace Inuyasha with him in her heart… well Sesshoumaru's reaction to that was unexpected. I enjoyed all of your hentai scenes you must own a copy of the kama sutra. I think the only question I had was when or where and how his feelings for her came about. That doesn't mean that I was dissatisfied with the story though. Quite the contrary actually. So I REALLY enjoyed your story. The story was refreshingly different and I think you did a wonderful job in your portrayal of Sesshoumaru. Your descriptions were great not too long-winded and pointless. And since I usually don't review a story until it's finished I also really appreciated the fact that you didn't try to blackmail your readers for reviews. I look forward to reading your future efforts. Tara Hall - gtolady@hotm |
Title: Finish it already!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay u gots us heated so now you gots to finish!
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Title: CLAPS INSANELY!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 17:45 CDT
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You are RAWKING that shyt Q.S.!!!! I love, love, LOVE it & you know i'm Inu/Kags all the way! The lemons are REALLY damn good...very sensual & give Sesshy-sama a whole new look. As I've told you a zillion times the first chap hurts my heart so much...ack! But like you said, it's comforting to know Kags has someone too....and it's not like Sess-Poo isn't drop dead gorgeous! ^_^
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 09:59 CDT
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Yay for a Chapter Two review! Ok, here goes: Awesome job, first of all. You did a great job with emotions, and characterizations. They were all acting the way they should, and I'm glad. :) Even Kikyo was well done, and she's difficult to do. I do have one bit of advice for improvement, though. Your sentences don't flow as nicely as they could. Often they are either choppy or overly wordy, and they do not piece together as well as they could. Combine some sentences, and delete some of their words, so that they flow from one action to the next. Think smoothe, and think in as few words as possible, while still getting the picture across. But really, you have an excellent story here, and I'm going to read the rest! I'm intrigued! Great job!
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Title: Great Sesshoumaru characterization
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: September 27, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very interested to read more of this. It's passionate, but incredibly mysterious; why exactly is Sesshoumaru suddenly lusting after Kagome, desiring her as his mate when he's made no apologies for his hatred of humans and Inuyasha? You've written him superbly in character (for this familiar plot of SxK sharing amazing sexual chemistry, he's astoundingly cold and vague, the way he should be but a way I've rarely read him) but that just creates more questions for both Kagome and we, the readers. You've got to keep this fic up; there is so much more lurking behind what's developed so far. I'm more than intrigued. Please update soon!
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Title: The Prize
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:07 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love inu/kag and i thought that i would be so pissed at this, but i wasn't. i love your story and can not wait until you update. your story is now added to my favs. and i am very picky when it comes to fav. update asap. i am dieing to know what happens next!!!!
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Title: The Prize
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I am an Inu/Kag fan, however I really like this story and look forward to your next review.
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