| "The Prize" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 13:23 CDT
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hmmm....intresting...I'll have to see where this goes
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Title: The Prize
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 15:30 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls off chair* WOW!!
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Title: cool!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sango rules!!!!! On: September 21, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!! (smiles)
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Title: OH MY GOD
Reviewed By: dixiefluffy On: September 19, 2005 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god that was so good man that is all out crazy it was so amazing. Dude i am going to have to make sure i read the next chapter is there going to be one becouse if there isnt i am going to die. WOW plz send me an email dixie1rosechild15@yahoo.com becouse i would love to get to know you and by the way you get a 100 on the story so good luck on the next chapter =) i will be waiting.
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Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, i love the story. and you just updated, it's so sad, because now i have to wait. that's so cruel. i want to know what happens! i love it!
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Title: The Prize
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 14:55 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Title: yes, Yes, YEs, YES!!!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! I like this! IT'S AN ORIGINAL FLUFFY/KAG FIC!!! Not yelling in anger, just EXCITEMENT! thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!! hehehehe... can't wait till next chappie! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 17:02 CDT
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Extremely interesting. I read both chapters and I can see where the story came from, especially with you missing "Return to the Place Where We First Met". It is a vital episode, and yet by missing it you've managed to come up with this amazing story. You have some great potential in your writing, and I look forward to more. If you need anyone to look over your writing feel free to send it to me in an email. I love doing beta work, I do it for InuGrrrl a lot. Keep up the writing!
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Title: Sesshy-Sama to the rescue!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad it's Sesshy that get kags...i couldn't deal with it if it were someone else. I'm still hatin' on Inu tho. ^_^
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Title: I want to cry.
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was powerful for me since you know I am diehard Inu/Kags. But I can appreciate your view. geez, I wanna cry...I have such a lump in my throat. But nontheless, it's well written.
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Title: FFRG review
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for submitting to FFRG. To begin...I am an extremely canon writer especially when it comes to Kagome and InuYasha. You mentioned you missed the 'Return to the place where we first met' episode and the summaries upset you. The summaries for that are very...misleading. When I first saw the episode...it upset me. But as the series goes on I realized that this episode is extremely pivotal in their relationship. InuYasha and Kagome ARE and continue to be THE canon pairing in the show. I'll just say the fact that you missed this particular episode...does show in the writing. It wasn't a 'choice' for InuYasha...it was an obligation. There are several places to find translations of the manga...just google InuYasha manga and you should find the sites easily. I recommend reading the translation for that arch...you might be surprised at how it differs from what you expected. In fact...if you want to write a believable fanfic...you should always know the series both inside and out. That goes for any story...research is key. If you plan on this being an alternate pairing, you might want to tweak things a little so it's more then just--InuYasha picking Kikyou. Anyone well versed in the series and looking for a good fanfic wants it as believable as possible. Sorry if I overwhelmed you a little...your writing is excellent and you have great potential. I really am curious to see where you take it--even what the pairing will be. Thanks for submitting to FFRG
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