| "The Butterfly" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DemonGirl-Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 09:07 CST
Comment/Review:
The whole thing of comparing Hisoka to a butterfly makes sense considering that the start of one of the manga chapters when Muraki is kiddnapping Hisoka, there was a lot of butterfly-wings all over the first page... * Tweaks from the thought * Just thinking about it sends chills down my spine... This is a great story! Please update soon!
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Title: WRITE
Reviewed By: yaoigypsie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this story so much that i even wrote my own YnM story on fanfiction.net called the demon world. update soon plz i've been waiting 4ever
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Reviewed By: WigInABox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, considering that I registered just to review this, it's obvious I enjoyed the story thus far. I really hope you write more since I'm starting to fill in the rest with my own ideas. I need to know what happens to poor Hisoka in this. :) You have excellent skill and I always enjoy the breaking away to alternate universe stories with these characters. Please continue. :)
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Reviewed By: ochibirules On: September 04, 2005 11:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
All nice!!!! Please Post the next chapter!!!! I Wan't to read more!!! =D
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Reviewed By: satinette On: August 31, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beautiful story. I love how this fic seems to be a reminiscent of an Arabrian Nights kind of story with Japanese culture mixed in. While this fic does have literary inspirations, it is original in it's own right. There aren't to many YdM fics out there that I adore but you can be assured that this is on my list of favorites.
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