| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 06:11 CDT
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Another great chapter! Kylise's dream or vision reminds me of the opening scene in the LOTR, nice work! I'm hooked ^_^ |
Reviewed By: see jane conform On: April 05, 2002 19:13 CST
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i like... i like a lot actually... this was extremely well written and quite the enjoyable fic... totally abs fabs... |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2002 17:21 CST
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OMG Jade that was sooooo abosolutely amazing! The descriptions, were just beautiful, i could see every part just as though it was happening to me and not Kelise, you truely are a talented author... and this has to be the best of yours that i have read so far! Way to go girl! You rock! |
Reviewed By: ºÇhíbì Ðâ®kº [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2002 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic was overall kept me on my toes, it was written perfectly the tension between the character was marvelous. You made them seem alive with each and everyone of your words. The detail was great i could see them in my minds eye. For you painted a picture that I could follow rather well. The wording was good, the grammar I didn't see any mistakes on my behalf. And certainly it has been the most addictive story I have read. It not only kept me on my toes for wanting more but it is keeping me rather curious. This is a very promising story. And the fighting scenes could use a bit of work but other than that it is perfectly written. You have truly have written a gem, one with many facelets. ^^ I am looking forward to reading the rest. |
Reviewed By: Dezz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 15:35 CST
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Your descriptions are really good. The flow of your story works nice. The character development is nice. Perhaps you should throw a wrench in the plotline, tho. It seems too "pre-fabricated". The characters seem to be acting as expected, but are developed nicely. An enjoyable read, thus far. =) I'm looking forward to seeing where you plan to take our travelers. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i can say is WOW Jade, that was beautiful! I loved the fight scene, have you been practicing that scene... maybe with your mom lol. Amazing work, and i enjoyed the interaction between Dradin, and Kylise... ahhhh i would love for this to be a kind of Jane Eyre type fic, where the hero isn't amazingly gorgeous, and the heroine isn't a sanctified bimbo, but i don't think you would let that happen anyway... great work, can't wait for more! |
