Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: September 04, 2005 23:08 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great start on the story, I really like the plot line, and where it's headed.... one thing that was missing though was a discription of the Lady of the Northern lands... do you think you could include that in your next chapter? Good work , keep it up, and you'll be seeing more of me in the next chapters! - kinoko
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