| "I Think I Love You" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: proud yusuke fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would have read this but it was too bunched up so i didnt bother.sorry :(
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
One tip, make sure your stories are formatted correctly, fics are rather hard to read when they're all 1 run on sentence like this 1 is. I don't care how good a writer is, most fics like this 1 most people won't even bother with because they're hard to read, you can get lost in the text quite easily, so why don't you go back & put all the chapters in paragraph form & save your potential readers from headache & eyestrain. Other than the bad formatting on everthing but the song lyrics I enjoyed the fic, would have liked it even better if I hadn't had to concentrate so hard to keep my place.
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Reviewed By: Velvet Diamond On: September 07, 2005 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like it. Please hurry and update.
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Reviewed By: sugar high water uma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 16:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
when are you going to update? ~crying and giving and puppy dog pout~ I need updates, PLEASE UPDATE, or i will start bugging you will alot of reviews. MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Dark Vixen On: September 05, 2005 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love the story so hurry up already and update so that i can read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: sugar high water uma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must write more, it is sooooooo cool, I HEART INU-YASHA/ YU YU HUKASHO CROSSOVERS
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Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah, space out your sentences, that only problem, other than that, i love it and you must update!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: CrazyHeadLoner On: August 29, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
its very interesting. i hope u update soon!
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: dawnstar28(not logged in) On: August 28, 2005 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! no spelling, or grammar errors. the perfect lenght...i would have to say that its an awesome start to an awesome story! keep up the great work! i cant wait to find out how hiei and kags met before! and how kags reacts to kurama's counter part! i'll be waiting for your next post! -dawn-
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