| "Open Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story !!!I can't wait till you continue!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 22:26 CDT
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I like this chapter. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: TwilitSky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you finally updated! I've been reading this story from the beginning and I have to say it's pretty good. I noticed that you've improved a lot on this new chapter, and I look forward to future chapters as well! TwilitSky
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Reviewed By: BrokenKoishii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 13:14 CDT
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To InuButterfly Thank you soo much, and yes I would be gratefull if you did give me some more pointers!:) This is my first ever fanfic, and I appreciate your review very much. I will study up on all the ship information, and hopfully that will improve my story. Thanks again, Broken Koishii P.S. don't worry, you definetly weren't being obsessive!:)constuctive critisism is welcome!
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Reviewed By: catalina27 On: September 09, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good so far cept for a few minor details...I sail. 'Starboard end' Isn't working. Starboard is the right side, not end. 'Sail rope' almost made me quit reading, but I'm glad i didn't. Sorry if i seem obsessive. If you did a little more reasearch, your story would be more realistic and make it seem like you knew what you are writting about. Nothing is called a rope. Use line or sheet. You could say jib sheet which basically means sail rope in sailor terms. If you have any desire to correct this I would be happy to help you, or you could just look it up. My real name is Inubutterfly. Anyway, I like your story. Keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 00:34 CDT
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Aww, he just left Kagome in a shed. Cruel! I've been reading from the beginning, but I was lazy and a horrible reviewer, seeing as I didn't review till now. Gomen nasai. I think this story is really good, and I want to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 20:48 CDT
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this a great start. please update soon.
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Title: hurry
Reviewed By: leyley On: August 30, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry and make another chaper i can't wait
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Reviewed By: BrokenKoishii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 14:13 CDT
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OMG thank you so much Chrissy14!:D That seriously means a lot to me, so thanks so much! I'm writing chapter 1 so it should be done by the end of today. Thanks again!:) Broken Koishii
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Reviewed By: Chrissy14 (nsi) On: August 29, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like it's going to be an awesome story! Can't wait for more chapters so please update soon!! ^-^
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