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Title: hey
Reviewed By: darksaint On: January 09, 2006 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I got to know what is going to happened next please don't leave me in such supence *cries* please update soon your fan darksaint
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Title: opps...sorry!
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 22:10 CST
Comment/Review:
...but it still makes for a decent plot if done wrong. talk about wrong word choice. i meant if done right....sorry!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
the plot of the story is well put together. to be honest, i saw kouga's attempted rape from chapter five but it still makes for a decent plot if done wrong. i feel that there is a lot of rushing around, though it's not a bad thing, just...well...rushed. the whole justice system thing though really dug into my skin. the tenacity of the cops/wardens/judge (given, naraku, but still)...was just far to much to swallow. to believe that they would (and i assume we are speaking present day since it has yet to be otherwise indicated) use leathel injection on a charge of 'attempted murder', which by all rights, it wasn't, it was aggrivated assult with malicious intent yet the psychological factor of temporal insanity since it was a traumatic experiance he walked in on could factor in...but all in all...it's ridicilous. i wanted to reach through teh computer and smack narkau for that one (but then again, when doesn't a reader want to pummel naraku?). honestly, that was the hardest part of teh story to swallow. other then for that, it's a good story.
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Reviewed By: serena_scyth On: December 01, 2005 14:41 CST
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she cant go back with koga!!!!!!!-throws a hissy fit them members what she learnd in class today-wait koga he dropped the charges and no person can be accused of the same crime twice!! im so happy i didnt fall asleep today!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: psychokitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great piece of work. Only thing is that I hope something horrible happens to Koga right after he gets out of jail, maybe get hit by a car or something.
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Reviewed By: redfluffydice05 (NSI) On: November 30, 2005 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a lovely chapter! The comedy, the drama, the soon to be angst! (im hyper...dis-reguard me) LOL More please!
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Title: Awww, poor kids!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 30, 2005 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, at least InuYasha nailed her before Kouga could. But now they've got to figure out how to kill him off :P
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Reviewed By: cm On: November 30, 2005 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Kouga can't take it back. he dropped the charges and no person can be accused of the same crime twice. Unless Inuyasha tries to kill him again than i don't think Kouga can do anything.
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Title: YES YES
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story i cant wait until you update PS i woiuld love to see ur version to my challenge, there is no time limit -u cant rush art ^.^- if you have any questions just leave a review or email me at princess__sweets16@hotmail.com OR princess_dark_lady_69@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: redfluffydice05 (not logged in) On: November 20, 2005 22:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT! *obliterates anyone/anything keeping Anubis from updating* Oh well...*waits patiently for next update* Is it here yet?
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Reviewed By: redfluffydice05 (not logged in) On: November 14, 2005 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you can't be serious...your bluffing...you wouldn't dare end it there...would you? PLEASE DON'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: November 08, 2005 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you end it there... I'll kill you.
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Reviewed By: mare On: November 04, 2005 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, that wouldn't be a great ending.*lol* Please continue... :)
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Reviewed By: elvin On: November 04, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic i really love it. but as to leaving it like that for the ending i think i might have to kill u if u do (j/k.... or am i?) anyways hopefully there will b another chap soon
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli9) On: November 04, 2005 16:39 CST
Comment/Review:
you'd better not end it here. with that said: update again soon please
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