| "Flesh and Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2laz2logn) On: November 04, 2005 15:05 CST
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OMG It cant end that way NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you gotta get them to find a loop hole or....SOMETHING!!!!!! AH PLEASE!!!!!!! ITS SUPPOSED TO BE A HAPPY ENDING RIGHT!!!!!!???
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Reviewed By: Sam22 On: November 04, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and the racism against hanyous is a good touch. But you can't let the Kouga the bastard really get away with this and get Kagome and her virginity that's just cold man. Anyway great job abd am looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: cm On: November 04, 2005 10:41 CST
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(eyes twitch)Better NOT let it end with Kagome being forced to be Kouga's. Let Kouga have an Accident in jail (aka: have Sesh send him a bomb or something like that. He has a lot of power so i don't think anyone would think of touching him) That would be great. Hurry up with the next chapter and kill Kouga before he gets out of jail.
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Title: That would SO not be a good ending!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 10:37 CST
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tell me you're kidding, lol. That ending would blow. Kouga needs to get his, that slimy fucker. Ya gotta at least give us that!
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Reviewed By: Orb On: November 04, 2005 10:21 CST
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Guh! Aww please don't let that be the ending. Although it actualyl would work wuite well. Kouga is such a bastard, seriously. But I have to take a shower. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: November 01, 2005 16:28 CST
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errr....here's luvin'?....anyways, too much to say, not enough time on this end..update again soon please.
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Title: Okay...that was just wrong!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 01, 2005 13:54 CST
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I felt so bad...but ofcourse you're gonna fix this...ken. I love the format you used. Very clever & the story was impossibly adorable. Well done!
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story pleaseee update soon i can't wait to find out if inu is going to get out of jail please update can't wait for the next chapter peace
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Reviewed By: ryutaiyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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im really getting into this story and i am emensly pleased that you update regulary but if my math is right (it is) and one heartbet per sec average (150lb male specimen late 20's med metabolic rate) then you plan on updating in about 2606? please tell me your fibing you i wont read anymore (like i'll have a choice)
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 22:16 CST
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oooo, fluffyness^^ update again soon please.
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Reviewed By: cm On: October 31, 2005 20:29 CST
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mind talking in time and not heartbeats? Technically Inuyasha didn't kill anyone so i don't think he can get the death sentence. all he did was beat Kouga up in Kagome's defense. Stupid cops being prejudice against hanyous. Great work and i can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: FormerlyOrb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 11:27 CST
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Ooooh.....If Kouga gets out of this I swear I'll cry. That is just incredible unfair. Poor Kagmoe. I hope you can update soon, this story is so awesome. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 10:44 CST
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surprizingly, I understood how it worked right off the bat, this is the first fic that I wasn't lost for the first few chapters. Thats' a good thing. I really like it, update soon please. ^^
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Reviewed By: cm On: October 30, 2005 01:27 CDT
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somehow, i get the feeling Kouga's not going to prison. That Inuyasha will end up in it but Kouga would get off. PLEASE don't let that happen. Please be quicker with the update because the suspense is driving me nuts.
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Reviewed By: FormerlyOrb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 19:57 CDT
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You're fucking kidding me, right? Dude that's so not fair!! Like...ugh, wtf? Inuyasha better get off or something. And Kouga should be crucified, seriously. I hope you can update soon becuase I might die of angst if you don't.
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