| "Of Shadow & Light" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:54 CDT
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wow, that was...slightly disturbing. your writing never ceases to amaze me. your ability to make the reader feel the feelings of your characters is incredible. it further allows the reader to lose themselves in the story. fantastic chapter. i'm guessing that at some point you will go back in the timeline and let us in on what happened with kagome and inuyasha. the story from the beginning. at least i'm hoping...love you babe
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue-not signed in On: September 05, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic i cant wait to see what happens next. what will kag do. i'm sure her mom will try to take her baby from her. anyway please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Cassandra0363 On: September 05, 2005 15:15 CDT
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I hate you! Why'd Inuyasha die so early? Will he come back to life, will he? God, this was so bad, please update many more, cause even with the fact of Inuyasha dying I want to know what happens. Just so you know I read the second before the first . . . plz update, cuz I really do love this story and I want to find out what happens!
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm feeling pretty bad for Kags actually. I love the new fic, and look foward to updates on your old ones. And I'm sorry to hear about all the crap that you've been through. I hope your hangin' in there! we love and support you! Take your time and don't push yourself for us!
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Reviewed By: porkchop_27 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 18:10 CDT
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Hott damn! This is different..I like it. 0_0 I'm glad to see you're back; hope you're doing okay. Keep up the awesome work and update when you get a chance! Can't wait!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahooo the notification problem is fixed. I received a 'fav' author notice.~~~~ Wow this is so deep!! The way you portray her sadness over what happened and what is happening is exceptional. That was a twist with the pregnancy. She seems so alone, her family against her decision to keep the baby and wanting to put her away. Great job on this!!
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: September 03, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*spechless* Wow. Just....wow. I started reading the story and was like this--> ^^ ya know, Kagome and Inuyasha--together and happy; thiking we'll be hearing about how they met, their strugles, what's up with them now then--then *sniffles* I was like this--> O_O!!! HOLY FREAKIN' CRAP!! That just came out of nowhere and I swear my eyes got that big! And then in the second chapter--so many twists! She was kidnapped by him?! Did she develop that syndrome where you become attached to your kidnapper?! Wow...Wow. And the baby now! Woah, I'm just so blown away confused, curious, shocked--gah! Everything! Well, well, done! I want to go pimp this story out because--wow. I'm just...wow. I hope you write another chapter soon ((I read your A/Ns so I know yu have other things on your mind...^^;;)) I can't wait to see what happens...Wow. Much love ((for you and your story)!! ^^
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: moonhanyou (not signed in) On: September 02, 2005 19:37 CDT
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you know, i really like this deep and thoughtful story. you've put so much effort into it and you're doing a great job making it very interesting and engaging. i love this story and i really can't wait to read more from you for this story. i'm very glad that things are going well with you and i hope things keep going okay. i love you baby and you're doing an amazing job! keep it up and i'll be back for more from you. love you!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: moonhanyou (not signed in) On: September 02, 2005 19:37 CDT
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hey baby! this is a great story! i love it! i can't wait to read the next chapter. it's a rather sad story, but it's really good. it's definitely different, but it's a great story. i love it! i can't wait for more, this is going to be a great story and i can't wait to see the next chapter! love you baby! (growling at spam code)
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever On: September 01, 2005 15:15 CDT
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hey sorry bout what happened, I lost a oved one to cancer too. well anyways nice story but its a bit dark
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 14:25 CDT
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wow, that was kinda morbid. I'm glad you're back hon. Sorry about your aunt and cousin. Great first chapter. I'm not sure how you're going to make a second chapter, though i'm curious. looking forward to the next chapter. love you babe
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Reviewed By: youkai_obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Huggles Kitty* I am so sorry for your losses!! I know this past year has been a rough one for you!! My review- I have missed you and your writing. I am so happy to see you are back to writing.--*Gasp-blink-blink* Oh my gawd, I was soo shocked by why happened in this chapter. I'm kinda speechless, and you know I rarely get like that. The descriptions of the clothing and the car were wonderful as always, I could picture everything in mah mind. Dayum that ending was unexpected and sad. I was at the edge of my seat. Hope to see more soon!! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: brokenhate On: August 30, 2005 03:19 CDT
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wow simply amazing. you had quite the hard times, may peace come to you and your family. i enjoy your work and am glad that you're back. this is a beginning to a great story, i look forward to the next chapter.
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