| "The Beating of Sae" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Zee-Zee On: August 24, 2005 13:49 CDT
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Poor Sae. I like her. :C Funny story, though. :B
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Reviewed By: maire On: May 17, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked that story but is that the end chapter 14? or are you writing more?
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Reviewed By: maire On: May 17, 2005 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is chapter 14 the last chapter like is the story done? Because it was really good so far!!!
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Reviewed By: maire On: May 17, 2005 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is chapter 14 the last chapter like is the story done? Because it was really good so far!!!
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! WOO HOO! I always wanted SAE'S ASS Kicked! But when I got to peach girl CHange of Heart 5, I felt sorry for her tough. So Sometimes I wish Momo didnt kick SAe's ass. SHe was even nicer in the Change of heart 8. Believe me! Your right! Ryo's brother in a ass. But he's still hot tough!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 18:40 CST
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i was just wandering around and came across this- anyways it ROX! peach girl is one of the best mangas i've ever read and i love this story. the plot developement is very interesting- and please update this! please!
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Reviewed By: Azurite On: December 22, 2002 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... interesting... we didn't really get to see what Kiley's plan was, per se, but we saw it put into motion... STILL, will Sae see through it? What's more, what will Miraki and Rinshai do-- or will Momo reveal HER plan with Kiley to them? And what was on that note Toji got? So many questions-- so few answers! Will you update soon? I hope so... |
Reviewed By: Azurite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOU!! You can't do that... make us wait so long for the next chapter and then not tell us what Kiley's fantastic plan is! ;_; MORE I SAY, MORE!please? /.\ |
Reviewed By: Azurite On: March 31, 2002 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Anyone would want to see Sae get her "just desserts" after all the bull she fed Toji in the hospital. I like the introduction of two of Momo's OLD friends, and especially their hinted schemes of playing matchmaker for Kiley and Momo. K/M all the way! Whoo! |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: March 11, 2002 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, PLEASE write more!!!! |
Reviewed By: maria On: February 16, 2002 09:32 CST
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i liked the story i'm a big peach girl fan !! keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
You should request a Peach Girl section. That way, this is in the right place. |
