| "Seeing the truth" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. But please use Paragraphs and Spaces.
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Title: Meep :]
Reviewed By: CreamyStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoulutly loved it :D. But next time spaces please :]. Oh please pretty please make a second chapter :D.
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Title: I forgot it
Reviewed By: Koumi_Locc On: August 30, 2005 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic and all, but you could have space it more! I more you need more spacing and lots of it lol.. By the Koumi Fan foe Life, Peaceout..
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