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| "Akiko" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Watarimono-san On: September 01, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...Alright then. That was odd. Your writing skills are pretty good, but I just have one complaint. Your character isn't the most terribly believable (.i.e. Special powers, 1337 fighting skills, tormented by others, orphan, etc.), so you might try giving her some crucial flaws that define her personality a bit more. Other than that, you're doing well.
| Title: What up?
Reviewed By: Rhea_Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 06:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey whats up, thats an interesting way to start a fanfic. The way you've written it makes it seem a little more unrealistic in a real type of world, but it makes it very interesting, i'd like to see how this goes so keep it up.
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