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| "Love=Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Arcane Omen 1989 On: September 18, 2005 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice ^^ It was really sweet & pleasing to read.You still write good Rikoh, then again, maybe I'm not the BEST ONE to be a critic >.>;;; ^^;;; Hehe
| Title: Wow, I haven't done this in a LONG time....
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much, Hiro-san! You were my first reviewer and you gave me great advice! After hearing your words of wisdom, I was thinking of maybe continuing the story. This is the first time I've experimented with all OCs and thank Ra it didn't destroy my lab. ^^;;; Wow, that was a pathetic metaphor. I tried so hard to make the story longer; I first struggled when I reached the top of the first page. Pretty bad, huh? Maybe instead of adding more chapters, I could add more to the beginning.... Wow, thanks! Now I'm getting all these ideas! You deserve sometihgn special for breaking my writer's block.... How about free sugar products? ^^;;; It's all I've got to offer. Well, here you go! Free sugar products including sugar, caramels, pixie sticks, and much mroe! Wow, I sound like a walking commercial. ^^;;; Ok, now that the meter has gone under 650 digits left, I'll shut up and save the typing for the new and improved Love=Magic! ^_^ Ja ne!
| Title: guess who
Reviewed By: Hiro-san On: September 01, 2005 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story i felt was too short if you make it longer and add more conflicts for the charaters to overcome the reader will grow attached and feel the joy you want them to feel you know like give them a reason to like these charaters. anyway i thought the story was sweet overall.
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