| "Kagome's Husband" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I really liked this chapter! I hope you have with whatever it is that you're doing for the next three weeks :) Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i can't believe that u killed miroku and sango! but i can see how it is essential tot he story, but how could her step-father do that to her? what did kagome do with Inuyasha? the only suggestion I could give would be to maybe add some more details and maybe set the scene a little more, you know talk about the various colors around the characters and the smells around them. That kinda stuff. also maybe add some more stuff about rin. :) well update soon, i can't wait to find out what Kagome and Inuyasha did! ~*~ Hanyou_swimmer
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! i can't believe u killed sango and miroku !!! but it a good story soo please update ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 08:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic has alot of potential. It needs a little bit more character development and some more description of the surroundings. I do hope you'll continue, however. :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving this plot. Haven't seen the type in a very long time! It's really wondeful to see a story with such potential since most of the new stories by new authors are ridiculous. There were some spelling errors but nothing a little prof-reading wouldn't fix. I hope you update soon.
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