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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 20:37 CDT
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Odd the image of Jura pregnant by the time they get to Mejere just passed through my head.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 22:20 CDT
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Can I call it or can I call it. Also I almost feel sorry for the cockbiting fucktard(feel free to borrow that insult). On the other hand I hope Lance rips out the guy's small intestines and strangles him with them. Also something tells me that while this is going on Utan has somehow gotten into the cockpit of the Iron Kong and is trying to steal it?
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:44 CDT
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Why do I get the feeling that Utan is going to fall in love with an Iron Kong MKII? Something tells me that Rabat is going to try to steal a zoid, any zoid. Also what are you going to do for a Super Zoiddread?
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:55 CDT
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Something tells me that the secret weapon at Mission 6 in this story is a Genosaurer or a Genobreaker. Also that story I mentioned, I meant after you finish this one. And by that I mean First Stage, Not Second Stage story.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 07:15 CDT
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Something tells me that they will find their mother soon. Then she will embarrass them like my parents do, only ten times worse.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know its early for asking but are you going to write a make out scene between the Reinhart brothers and the girls and keep updating gundread seed its awesome.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 10:39 CDT
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I meant after you finish this story.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 00:27 CDT
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Alright you took my suggestion. Something tells me that that are other ground units out there though. Also you never answered me on the idea of an alternate story where instead of Liger ZERO's they pilot Berserk Fury's. What do you think of that idea? Also for ideas on the armor if you do go with that idea just look for the stories Ancient Legacies, Uncertain Future, and Reuniting the Tribes. Also do the Gojalus have the supercannons on there back or do they not have them?
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Title: Machine Idea
Reviewed By: GemstoneWarr On: March 29, 2007 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far. If you want to get an idea of how they should look you can base them on the red crab like machines that invade the menalous fleet but larger. most of the machines are robotic with legs and arms, almost insect like. The only aliens ones i can think of as something different are the robotic invid mecha from Robotech: sentinels, the inorganics, Scrim, Crann, Odeon and Hellcats.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 18:28 CDT
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You realize that I gave you suggestions? Also here are more. perhaps they could look similar to the AT-TE's that appear in Star Wars Episode two. You know the ones with six legs and a big cannon on the front? Or like I said before they could looks similar to the Guysack zoids(the scorpion ones). maybe the ZaOOT mobile suits. How about similar to the Radam spider crabs. Or perhaps even a tank like version of the Cube fighter.
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Title: Suggestions
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 12:48 CDT
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How about you have the ground forces look like the AT-TE's, AT-AT's, and AT-ST's Star Wars? Or perhaps the Radam Spider Crabs from Tekkaman Blade? Or perhaps have them looks like Guysack zoids. Also didn't the brothers also have Rev Raptors?
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 21:54 CDT
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So far so good. I completely agree with what Brandon is saying. Being pretty on the battlefield is just asking to get killed. Also in the last chapter why didn't the Gojalus' use their supercannons?
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Title: Another Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You know Meia and Brandon are acting just like me and my girlfriend acted toward each other for the first few months we knew each other. I hope those two get together soon. Also can't wait for the next chapter. Perhaps then would be a time to use the standard Command Wolf tactic of ganging up on one enemy to take them down. Also why didn't you give Meia, Jura, and Dita Zoid training for ground combat missions? I mean the cockpits of zoids are about as large as those of the Dreads? Finally what was the end of that sentence that Lance told his brothers to shut up about?
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you want good info on the Zoids, go to Wikipedia. Also for basic Zoids the ones that are considered that are the ones you already mentioned plus these: Gunsniper, Rev Raptor, Cannon Tortoise, Molga, Sinker(the stingray ones), War Shark, HammerHead, Hell Cat, and Red Horn. No I am not kidding on the last one. Also I believe you forgot a Command Wolf variant: the Urban Combat Variant. You know the ones with the Four cannons on the back.
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Title: Umm not exactly on the Gojalus
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the Gojalus was originally intended for close combat. In fact its original weakness was the fact that it didn't have any long range weapons. The Supercannons were added later. Along with all the other weapons. Also a Lightning Saix is NOT a basic zoid. Also the Iron Kong is perhaps the fastest Artillery zoids with a top speed of 150 KPH. That's twice as fast as the Gojalus. Also out of curiosity why didn't they bring along Genosaurers? Hey how about after you finish this story you right an alternate version where they use Berserk Furys instead of Liger ZEROs.
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