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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 21:54 CDT
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So far so good. I completely agree with what Brandon is saying. Being pretty on the battlefield is just asking to get killed. Also in the last chapter why didn't the Gojalus' use their supercannons?
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Title: Another Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You know Meia and Brandon are acting just like me and my girlfriend acted toward each other for the first few months we knew each other. I hope those two get together soon. Also can't wait for the next chapter. Perhaps then would be a time to use the standard Command Wolf tactic of ganging up on one enemy to take them down. Also why didn't you give Meia, Jura, and Dita Zoid training for ground combat missions? I mean the cockpits of zoids are about as large as those of the Dreads? Finally what was the end of that sentence that Lance told his brothers to shut up about?
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you want good info on the Zoids, go to Wikipedia. Also for basic Zoids the ones that are considered that are the ones you already mentioned plus these: Gunsniper, Rev Raptor, Cannon Tortoise, Molga, Sinker(the stingray ones), War Shark, HammerHead, Hell Cat, and Red Horn. No I am not kidding on the last one. Also I believe you forgot a Command Wolf variant: the Urban Combat Variant. You know the ones with the Four cannons on the back.
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Title: Umm not exactly on the Gojalus
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the Gojalus was originally intended for close combat. In fact its original weakness was the fact that it didn't have any long range weapons. The Supercannons were added later. Along with all the other weapons. Also a Lightning Saix is NOT a basic zoid. Also the Iron Kong is perhaps the fastest Artillery zoids with a top speed of 150 KPH. That's twice as fast as the Gojalus. Also out of curiosity why didn't they bring along Genosaurers? Hey how about after you finish this story you right an alternate version where they use Berserk Furys instead of Liger ZEROs.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait I thought that they had more zoids than that. Also I assume that this chapter isn't completed yet. also could you update KnightDread soon?
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Odd, the image of Dita firing off the supercannons of a Gojalus causing massive devastation, while Meia uses a Lightning Saix to perform high speed attacks, all the while Jura and Barnette tag team an enemy with Jura in a Blade Liger and Barnette in a Zaber Fang with a gattling on its back like Colonel Schubalts'.
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Title: Another Great Chapter.
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great revision. I hope you update soon. This story along with KnightDread and Gundread. Also maybe Scott could do the same thing that Kyo did to snap Jura out of her funk.
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Reviewed By: samster On: February 25, 2007 14:25 CST
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update zoiddread and leave gundread alone for awile u update it too much
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Title: Nooooooooo finish gundread! >.
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 01:11 CDT
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ZOmg dude dont stop now! we WANT gundread as much as we want zoidread...(personally i thought it was better my self...*sweatdrop*),but your choice. but i demand a finishing of gundread!*waggles fingers*
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Title: awesomeness
Reviewed By: Dark_Hound [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it Eternal, i just love the way u expres the story to its full and i hope to do that in my New story Kiryu 2:ROTK so plz chek i out and keep up te good work
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Title: Coolness
Reviewed By: Chichiri MonkMask [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked Vandread and only saw some of a zoid series a long times ago ,I wish I could have seen more but I really liked it. So seeing a crossover of zoid is really cool ,keep it up! Later...
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Title: Short
Reviewed By: Seed00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 08:52 CDT
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Short but ok, short but okay. Ah, come on, please add some more stuff, pretty please?
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Tifa_Lockheart022 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i love this story its just like your other story with Kyo in it but better. I mean the 3 women won\\\'t have to fight about just one man. Now each of them gets one which is freaking awesome. Anyways write another chapter I want to see what happens next. ^_^
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Title: Seed00
Reviewed By: Seed00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 07:36 CDT
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You already know the ratings I give so it shouldn't matter up to this point. It was pretty funny that Gasco had to be paired with Lance in Dita in the same cockpit, while you could have just put her with Brandon, comic relief is always a good. The rating is P, so i assume there won't be crazy sauna scenes with the women. Make the brothers personalities that makes them kinda opposite of the Dread ladies. Also, watch out with the people's names, Max and Duero: that's what you put. Be careful not to mix the characters from Gundread. Please, try not to leave ZoiDread on hold for too long. As much as I like Gundread, I really like this as well. Mostly the possibilities of interaction b/w the pilots, and the situation they find themselves in.I'll email if i can think of anything else.
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Title: Seed00
Reviewed By: Seed00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't put a rating a rating because I pretty much like your story already, along with Gundread. Except with this story, I just see a couple pattern. Lance/Dita, Brandon/Meia, Scott/Jura. All of them having their own little moments. The ground mission with Brandon, and the Apathos mission with Scott. Now, that I've said it, you'll try and prove me wrong, won't you. I really like it. So, keep the chapters coming. By the way, the character dying on Gundread :Second Stage will be Gasco. Ha! Not killing her will reduce the effect of the messgae she tries to send. Anyway, peace out
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