| "Boarding School" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG you finally finished. You did a wonderful job with this story and I hope to read more from you in the future. Good Luck!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Tlynn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please do not leave Ryo out in thatcourtyard too long! I think I know what is going on but I don't know how, but I'm nervous for our boy. Oh - And I should, or maybe it is shouldn't, thank you. Your's was the first fanfic I got hooked on! And because this was infinished, after I stayed up all night reading it, well it inspired me to write out my own Dee and Ryo fantasies. So my fics are your fault! Keep up the good work, and get Ryo out of the cold and back into Dee's arms soon! Trish
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Reviewed By: Aacire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, you updated! I was really looking foward to you posting a new chapter. Wow, was that Dee's plan. To det Martin up by using Ryo. Oh, you have to post the next chapter because I really want to know what the outcome will be. Till the next chapter, Asta!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 18:13 CDT
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Cruel! How could you just leave us hanging like that! Oh, please update soon! This is such a wonderful story and such a killer cliffhanger!
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Reviewed By: Aacire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, poor JJ! He just can't catch a break can he! I hate what they're doing to Ryo! Can't wait for the next chapter, Asta!
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Reviewed By: bryt Columbia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 04:27 CST
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I just read "Ryo's Lesson" and I'm in a state of awe. That was your best lemon yet. They're both so adorable! I think you've done a great job of capturing Ryo and Dee as teenagers. You're making me love them even more than before, and I didn't think that was possible (I'm even worrying about their future together in the fifties). I just can't get enough of this world you've created. Please update it as soon as you have some time.
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Reviewed By: bryt Columbia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 04:54 CST
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I've just finished chapter 20, and I can't BELIEVE you don't have more reviews. I'm enjoying this story so much. I especially like the deep devotion between Ryo and Dee. This story is sweet, sexy, sometimes stressful to read, and a very entertaining and original take on Fake.
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Reviewed By: Aacire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your two new chapters were good, and they defiantly made up for lost time! Have fun in San Francisco!
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Reviewed By: Aacire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has you all the way to the end! You said it was complete, but where are the other chapters because I like reading this! Oh, and I hope that Dee finally gets to kick Martin's ass for all that he's done! I just don't want him to get kicked out for it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: littleloonilupin On: October 04, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far! ^_^ can't wait to see how it all pan's out with Ryo and Dee's new roommates!! :) please update soon!
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Reviewed By: NME On: September 29, 2005 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your fic and really enoying it. It's very cute! Ack, but now Ryo is going to have to room with Berkley. Poor Ryo... can't wait to read more from you!
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Reviewed By: Somethinglikehuman On: September 28, 2005 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying this fic! very original!! I like how you set it back in teh 50's and made it difficult for Ryo since he is half-Japanese. But making him room with Rose? omg... devious!!
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