| "For You" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Title: For You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 20:09 CDT
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LUV UR STORY AND I AGREE WIT INUGRRRL EITHER KEEP ON GOING WIT THE STORY OR U CAN END IT IF U WANT.
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Title: I liked it!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The choice is really yours, but if you choose to end it that's a good spot. You basically wrapped up all the loose ends. But if you decide to lengthen, i'll definitely keep reading.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, it would be good to end it there, yet if you decide to keep going, that is your choice... i don't mind either way, just let us know if you intend to continue or not. By the way, loved this chapter, whether it is the last one or not, i loved it.
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait till the next wonderful chapter, good job on the plot and the way you portray your characters. Keep up the good work, and you'll be seeing more of me! - kinoko
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Title: Loved The Updates
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like this story alot & can't wait to read more.
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Title: For You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 17:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Haru's Lover On: September 06, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh,how sad.Poor Inu,and Kagome too of course.I would forgive just because I want to hug him (and much more)XD!Great story!More Pweaze!Thankies.
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Title: For You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: September 06, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, very touchy and angsty too, so things are going to be a little tense between them eh? Well, if it wasn't, then it wouldn't be normal... for when something like that happens between two people, it leaves a permanent scar in ones mind and heart, so Inu's going to have to work VERY hard to at least get Kagome to even look at him for 5 seconds without seeing hate in her eyes. Your story is nice and i like it, as for what should happen in the next chapter... well, maybe you should let us in on what the effects of the mating mark will be, since Inuyasha did it while being a full demon it might have some side-effects or something... but i don't know, it's your story so it's just a suggestion, whatever you come up with will be fine by me, since i'll read it anyway. Update soon, okay?
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Title: next chapter please
Reviewed By: sunflashmace7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it nice and dramatic!
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Title: For You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: You can't stop now!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a damn cliffy!!! I LOVE Inu as a full demon! This fic so far is quite fun. Update ....like now! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 23:42 CDT
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It is interesting but there are few things I want to comment on. The first being that in one sentence it said "He stared down into her amber eyes", I'm guessing that was a typo since Kagome doesn't have amber eyes. The second thing being that it's hard to believe Kagome would just admit her love like that just because he was being a little mean to her. She's put up with a lot worse and didn't break so that scene made her a little OOC. It also seemed kind of mellow dramatic with her failling to the ground and crying over this. You might have wanted to make it a dramatic scene in the story but all that was just too much drama and it wasn't at the right time. I just can't see Kagome breaking down and crying on her kness and admitting that she loves him just because he was being moody. He's called her stupid, ridiculous, a shard detector, annoying, weak, etc. And still she never cried. Inuyasha was a bit OOC in the second chapter also. Along with Kagome just knocking him to the ground and getting on top of him.
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is pretty good so far. I hope you write more soon.
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Title: great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: September 01, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i wish you would wright more !
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