| "Honor-Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: EternalKaze On: August 21, 2006 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHHH! OH MY GOSH! Thank you so much for this fanfiction. The plot, the characters, the suspense...everything just makes me ache. There are so few authors nowadays who can write fanfiction with a lot of characterization and provide in-depth emotion for the characters and evoke also the same kind of deep emotions from the reader! And I simply ADORE the moral dilemma you have placed Heero in-- split between his duty and his need to protect Wufei and then torn over his next actions because whatever he chooses may very well bring further harm to Wufei. Oh, oh, oh! *tears* It was so obvious to readers that Mariemaia was evil...but the GW boys were just too kind. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: chantygal (NSI) On: August 20, 2006 21:50 EDT
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aww man .......i always knew children were the devil...............intrigued to find out how yuy is going to solve this problem. Don't leave me hanging.Plus i'm dying for a little more lemon.........^__^. Keep writing.Keep updating. The story is good.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 18:24 EDT
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grar I just spent the entire afternoon reading this... i love it! I'm not gonna go all ballistic and say update again, but I do enjoy this story. I have a feeling that his poison is something a little more than what it looks like. It doens't just kill the person... it makes them hallucinate and... dare I say it? Sleep walk. I like the development. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: August 20, 2006 13:33 EDT
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Wow, Mariemeia is just a sneaky little demon (hope she gets what's coming to her). But when she said [to 'forget' to administer the andidote to Relena and Wufei every day] does that mean she will keep poisoning them every day, she's only going to give them portions of the antidote, or what? Other than that small bit of confusion, it is wonderous. I can't wait for more of this story.
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Reviewed By: greenislovely On: August 20, 2006 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... i'm throughly impressed with your imagination and planning! poor heero being trapped... thanks for sharing and hope the next update is soon!
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: August 19, 2006 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay no more thinking about it I hate her. Mariemaia must die. You just don't go messing around with Wufei like that and then on top of that try to control Heero. She has to die, please, or at least bang her up a bit. And what was going on with Wing and Wufei that seems interesting. Oh by the way the quick update was a blessing thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: August 15, 2006 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once agin I'm logged on, but I'm leaving a review anyway. Oh yeah Heero really knows hoe to be professional, not, but do I care no! because that's the kind of action I like to see. I love when Heero has he's little jealous moments, and to think he's threatened by a little girl,it's cute. As for Marie warning bells are starting to go off so I hope they get her off their ship soon. And Trowa is really starting to be a pain in the butt, I though Heero was the Gun ho solider of the group but it seems Trowa can be all about the mission just as much. It was wonderful especially after a long absence of writing, it's good to see you back.
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Reviewed By: elleto On: August 15, 2006 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! i'm glad you updated, i was walking around the 1x5 fandom recently, and thought, when the hell is amiko going to update? huff huff. but LOOK. amazing. i'm so glad. good job on this again, and nice touches of the jealousy. i liked the characterisation of mariemaeia, although she's a bit more whacko in the series. like...spoiled brat who yells and sneers whacko. i'm happy though. viva la 1x5!!
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: July 09, 2006 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeal* Wufei and Heero kissed! Yes! That scene is possible my favorite scene in the story so far, and I love so many parts (the shower scene for one, and the amazing and often funny banter). Mariemeia makes the already rich plot extremely thick. So many unanswered questions; I can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: greenislovely On: July 06, 2006 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can constantly count on you to provide a well written chapter! again i heart your development of characters and it was a nice introduction to mariemara. it was also nice to see that heero and wufei were finally able to cuddle and more defined relationship. lol too bad for duo's timed entrance! X3 thanks for updating and i really look forward for the next post.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: July 06, 2006 21:23 EDT
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Sorry not logged in. Finally some concret action between the two, it was worth all the tension. What is Marie doing there? I like her but I hope she has no secrets concerning Wufei. Though really right now I'm really interested in Heero's thoughts about what happened between him and Wufei.
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Reviewed By: takeabow On: July 06, 2006 05:23 EDT
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*squeals and dies* for that heero/wufei moment. ah........... and distracted as i am, hmmm, the introduction of mariemaia.. what's that gonna mean? can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: June 28, 2006 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So. Dang. Cool! Wufei's out of Millardo's clutches and we first encountered the mobile dolls in combat, but now we have the small pilot, Relena and Hilde to explain to, and the wonderous relationship development between Wufei and Heero (YAY!). This story is truly amazing and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: greenislovely On: June 27, 2006 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! i was so happy/suprised to see that this was updated. :) again it was a wonderful chapter- i love the way you write the action scenes. wonderful word choice and sentence structure. i really like how you've been devleoping the characters as well. thank you for writing and for updating. hope to see another one soon!
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Reviewed By: cookiezzzzz On: June 27, 2006 10:01 EDT
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"Idiots! Stop!" i laughed when i read that. anyway, it was exciting... pains me to have to wait for the rest of the story, but i'm glad u got a break and had fun in tokyo.. ahhh jealous! XD
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