| "Honor-Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been so long since I've read such a brilliant, lengthy fic! I have a feeling I should check the MMOrg database more often. I loved the way Wufei doesn't remember Heero and how poor Heero's stewing over it. I also love Duo laughing at poor Heero's predicament. It's funny how Heero thought he was saving Wufei and all he managed to do was screw himself two ways. lol. I love how the fic's all mysterious, it totally captures my attention. *coos* Heero lost his heart to someone long ago and doesn't realise it. *melts into a little puddle of mush*. Love that line. Oh my god the end! When will part 2 come out? Anyway, I love your work. Always. Thanks so much for such a brilliant fic.
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Reviewed By: caitilin2 On: February 18, 2006 21:22 EST
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wow! amazing fic - left me wanting more. Your boys are all plausible and in character fantastically and work together brilliantly!
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Reviewed By: iris c On: February 17, 2006 22:20 EST
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YAAAAAAHHH! "with my life" ::shivers:: Oh the insuffrable brat and stubborn prick are such a pair... Great end to part 1. Great characterization + action. Can't wait for more!
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Title: guardiananarchy@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Sancta On: February 17, 2006 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sits In Awe: I loved it and can't truly wait until the next part comes out. Though I am curious as to why you haven't updated your website as of yet? Please respond back to me when you get the chance ...
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: February 17, 2006 17:40 EST
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What a joy to read! I can't tell you how much I've loved this fic. It's so original and well thought out. Your action is clear, easy to visualize and logical; your characters are human, interesting, and both in character and fresh; and the plotting is brilliant: you dole out hints and clues perfectly. I am enjoying hating Relena, who is as inflexible as I always suspected. And Treize! Such an elegant slimeball. I half expected some NCS and in my mind, that is pretty much what Treize did. I'm even comfortable with Duo flirting with Hilde instead of Heero. Great job. Please please keep the updates coming; I can't get this fic out of my head.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 11:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my it was something. All the action actually didn't have my head spinning I could keep up with everything. Relena is annoying me but Hilde rocks like no tomorrow. I think I'm going to like the relationship between Hilde and Wufei and also seeing Heero's reaction to said relationship. I mean even in that brief scene of tug a war Wufei as soon as Wufei showed some slack to Hilde Heero got all defensive, he was all "no he's mine" it was sweet. And I absolutely love the part at the end Heero is so soft for Wufei too bad he only shows it when no one's looking, not even Fei. This fic is so great I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome stuff. Glad to see they're going into space finally. Loving the interaction between heero and wufei.The pace of the story is great and the action quality is good. Keep writing. Keep updating :)
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Title: Sweet!!!
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 16:30 EST
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enjoying the story immensly.Glad wufei's come to his senses.Can't wait to see where it goes from here. I'm on edge with this story you have a good writing style.and your pardoned for your grammar [mine is not even half as good ;)]
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 13:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. I was especially fond of Wufei's dreams, it's nice to get some answers no matter how vague. There was a lot of action towards the end so it's a bit weird that I don't have more to say. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: S_K On: February 06, 2006 13:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Chapter 15: I was about ready to strangle Treize after observing that he was so obviously being a manipulative bastard. Best of all, I could see this scene happening exactly, especially Wufei's reaction towards hearing that the chief reason for his being there was to act as a homing beacon to his folks back home. Wherever that is. Kudos. It can be bloody difficult to write a character you dislike and still manage to come off making him seem in-character as so it suits your purposes. This fic is one of my favourite Wufei ones, and it probably isn't even a quarter of a way through being done yet. May I say the most enjoyable AU one as well. So far, I place it second in line of those you've already written focused on Wufei; the best series I think is the one involving the threesome with Heero, Trowa and Wufei, but that has already been completed, while this has a ways to go. I very rarely review, because I always want to give as much as possible a full-blown critique as I can and that would be totally uncool with the amount of material I go through most of the time. Grammer near-perfect, style straightforward and engaging. Your take on Wufei's characterisation is spot-on. With regular betas and proper formatting, I think this will turn out wonderfully. Think of revising one or two of your rushed earlier chapters if you have the time - there's always room for perfection! I've got this on my watch-list and I never drop a fic from there!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 10:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was under the impression I've review this wonderful piece of fanfiction before but it seems I've only thought all that praise in my very happy fiction maniac's mind! I'd try to write it all down here for you to see but unfortunatelly I'm bound in the 4000 characters limits and I don't want to start when I won't be able to say all I want to :D But allow me to just say I eagerly await every new chapter and devour it as soon as I can sneak in a few minutes of free time. Continue to update and bring your inspiring work to us readers as fast as possible!
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was great. I loved the protective side of Herro, but what was up with Duo? The was so much action I had to look for the plot of the-not-so-much-of-a-mystery mystery. Though it's like as soon as one thing is uncovered another thing pops up to be questioned. It's starting to get crazy and I love it all. I can't wait for more.
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: michikoneko notsignedin On: February 02, 2006 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Why'd you stop there?! *begs* Hurry and write more?!
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Reviewed By: iris c On: February 02, 2006 14:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, please update. 14 chapters of suspense and 1 chapter of teasing is enough to drive a person crazy. I love the slow and painful progression of Heero and Wufei's love for each other, and Shinigami's flashes of madness are always brilliant. :)
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 22:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my it's finally coming together. Treize seems to be the bad guy and not as honorable as he would have others believe. I so love Heero's protectiveness of Wufei, it's sweet. I hate that Wufei always loses to Treize in their "first dual." I hope there is some revenge for whatever Treize did to Fei, hopefully Heero can fix it. I can't wait for further updates this fic makes me crave more.
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