| "Honor-Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tianaki On: September 23, 2005 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is extremely well-written. I can find almost no errors, and the story is captivating and moves at a nice pace. please keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: I_malive On: September 23, 2005 15:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I've been looking for a yaoi Wufei centered fic for a while. I can't wait for the 1X5 loving, or to find out who "she" is, I have a suspicion but I won't say. Anyway I look forward to more soon.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:52 EDT
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Oh my gosh.This fic just gets better and better.I love the tension going on between Heero and Wufei.Just like Wufei I'm dying to know what is going on and what is up with the stick.I'll be checking back whenever possible for updates so please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Davr On: September 17, 2005 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite enjoyable so far - I'm checking back every day to see if there's more. (It would be nice to see more before I have to go back to work Monday - hint, hint.)
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Reviewed By: Aubergine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 22:18 EDT
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I love how this fanfic is AU, but everyone is still in character. In fact, I think the characterization is a lot better than a lot of fics that take place in the canon timeline. Duo's sociable without being stupid, Heero's determined without being a rock, Quatre is polite and friendly without being a pushover, and Wufei's difficult but not an ass. And your warnings of character bashing of so far unwarranted, in the series, Relena is naive, self-absorbed, but well-meaning. She's that in this fic too. It's lovely how you don't cave into GW stereotypes. I think your writing technique is wonderful too. You manage to avoid cliffhangers (which are really annoying), but you keep my interest piqued. All around, a lovely job. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 15:37 EDT
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I love this story so far. There are so many mysteries to solve and I can't help but question who Wufei really is.Please keep writing soon
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Reviewed By: chantygyal On: September 02, 2005 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This storyline is very interesting so far. I'm enjoying the fact that yu have kept the personalities of each character as from the original series making their responses to situations laughable and enjoyable all at the same time. Please continue with it. I await the rest of twist and turns this story will take.
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