| "Honor-Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: bloodywingz On: February 28, 2008 17:52 EST
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*SMOOCHES* You're sooo awesome right now!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine B. On: February 23, 2008 12:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh THANKU THANKU THANKU THANKU THANKU!!!!! God I love this story and I'm sooo happy that you started back writing. Way to leave us with some cliffhanger!!! hope to see more very soon! I can't wait to see Fei's reaction to the Hilde news!!! Keep up the good work!!! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: February 23, 2008 09:05 EST
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That was wonderful! A bit of intrigue with Shen, and then fabulous Trieze and Wufei interaction (or twisted flirting on Trieze's part, which is great). Trowa and Quatre seem to be finally getting to their confessions of how they feel, and then you hit us right at the ending with a cute hickey scene, and pregnancy! Needless to say I am looking forward to the next chapter (and the fact this story is so long is a good thing, it is an awesome fic).
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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 06:39 EST
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The Wufei/Treize scene is creepy. Good kind of creepy. Dragon vs Monkey, round 3. Ding!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 23:07 EST
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Whoooo! No problems on the long wait! Very nice chapter. I'm glad Wufei's finally realized the reincarnation aspect. I look forward to more!
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Title: wrt chapter 40
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: October 28, 2007 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
actually from my culture(chinese) the explanation goes as this: now in the present ppl only have one chinese name, ming zhi. but in actual fact, in the past this ming zhi is split into two. ming and zhi, each used in difference situations. and also they believe that it is unlucky to give good names to their children as in hinders their future or something so maybe that explains why wufei has a not nice name. By the way i enjoy your fiction a lot. now on to chapter 41
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 20:44 EDT
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Good God! That was HOT! Great scene by the way. I was so happy when I saw that you had written more. I haven't been able to check to see if you had for a while... Hence reviewing in October. But, I really do love this story and I am so glad you aren't giving up on it. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update again soon, please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: September 15, 2007 05:11 EDT
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it was good...please keep going!!^^
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 02:37 EDT
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You are forgiven because it was a wonderful sex scene. Very very nice.
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: September 12, 2007 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deliciously sexy. Very drool-worthy. But as much as I love this story...I love Shatter, too. So, feel free to alternate updates...or update both at once...or anything that give me more yummy stuff to read!
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Reviewed By: silxcite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thnx for the update, the chpt was enjoyable. it was interesting to see wufei beaten up by zhao cuz the way he was portrayed he seen as too arrogant.
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Title: Great Work
Reviewed By: LizzyC On: August 22, 2007 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a delightful story to read. It had it's ups and downs and kept my attention the who time I was reading. I am looking forward to reading more of this story and more of your writings in the future.
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Reviewed By: LoAngel On: July 30, 2007 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a wonderful story line and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: June 25, 2007 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just great. The plot is still very tangled and mysterious, but you can the beginnings of how it will come together (personally my mind keeps yelling at me that Duo is some earthly version of the monkey king because of his weird age and how he kept trying to claim the stick, though everyone else's extra identities elude me). I just love this, including your portrayal of the characters and your highly original plot. Both are very complex and engaging (OCs and Relena included). I hope it all works out for everybody though in the end (especially Heero and Wufei).
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, Duo has some relation to this Sun Wukong person, doesn't he? Oh jeeze. And if Mingzhu knows about 'Fei and Heero...shit is gonna fly. Aw, no. Already I'm tense about this. And I can't help but feel sorry for Relena. I can't wait to hear the details about that ceremony for the dragon's acceptance. How interesting. I have a feeling that will explain a lot. And the explanation about why Quatre's empathy keeps hitting a wall when it comes to Trowa makes sense. I hadn't thought of the 'immunity' theory. Huh. And now that Trowa's built it up he's gonna have a hell of a time tearing it down. Those two, I swear. That's the problem with starting out as friends and trying to end up as something more. Quatre seems to have problems holding onto his anger against Trowa, btw. Lol. Oh, by the way, way back in chapter 35, Wufei promised Ling he'd call her back as soon as they reached their "destination". As a mother, she's got to be going crazy, because how long has it been? A couple of weeks at least. And Mingzhu and the council members don't seem to think too highly of her, so she's undoubtedly been left out of the loop, unless Quatre's been keeping her updated. Which I doubt, considering how busy they've all been. And somebody needs to kill Mariemaia. Quickly. I don't care about pain and torture right now, just GET RID OF HER!!! We can mutilate the body later. I hate her, I really do. Treize sucks at parenting, apparently. God knows what she would be like if she was an orphan like Duo. As for Duo, his taking the surname 'Maxwell' has to have something to do with a similar tragedy in his past, but it seems (according to those chapters where they were on L2) that Duo was actually there. I am still trying to puzzle that out. Hmmmm... I was starting to worry that you'd abandoned the story for a while, since you've been updating Evening the Odds. Thank you so much for the new chapter! It brightens up my life. Lol. Update again when you can, please!
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