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Title: Fight on, brave author!
Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic. if it has to go over 60 chapeters, SO BE IT! One of my favorite fics is almost 150 chapers long. It is one of the best fan fics ever written, though this story could give it a run for it's money. CONTINUE THE STORY< NO MATTER HOW LONG IT ENDS UP BEING!!!
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Reviewed By: greenislovely On: May 30, 2007 01:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
with this story, i didn't even realize it was already on chapter 50. your style really emerses the reader into the plot and characters that length has no meaning. there has never been a dull moment in this story. thanks so much for continuing and can't read the rest!
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 15:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, I don't care if HB goes to a hundred chapters. Just please, please, PLEASE don't rush it. You've done so well; it was be such a shame to ruin it now! and I really hope Quatre and Trowa work things out. Don't be mad, Q! For having the gift of empathy, he sure can be selectively blind when it comes to Trowa. Poor Baby. Duo may need Hilde as his partner in matchmaking to pull this one off... Update soon. I've read stories with close to 200 chapters, so don't worry about sixty. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: May 29, 2007 08:13 EDT
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Wow....I like Wufei and Heero shagging....It was good Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: May 25, 2007 13:16 EDT
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So good like always and yes treize is stupid...please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray for the fast update! And Duo's right; he's very perceptive about things like that. But what's Trowa going to do? Hopefully Q won't hold Trowa's protectiveness against him... Poor guy, he's so lost. Thank goodness he has Duo to help him out. Lol. Milliardo was a nice guy, so I'm very relieved about that. They weren't all that rude to Quatre, but I'm worried something will back fire and they'll still get shot down or something equally undesirable. So Wufei better hone his seriously lacking diplomacy skills and quit picking fights with leaders who have the power to destroy his people. Again. Maybe Relena should give him lessons. Unless the fights are with Zhao. Then that's okay. Apparently more foot-stomping by the Primary Guardian is in order. And seeing Trowa sulk is so amusing, and it's nice to see that his fight with Quatre really did bother him. I hope those two can work things out. But if Mariemaia is still there, I doubt anything will go smoothly at Wufei's party. Probably something to do with his Mark. I'll just have to wait, worry, and see. And I'm sensing the end of this story coming soon. Oh, and I don't like how Shen made Wufei stand ALONE in the hallway while he continued the conversation with Trieze. That's not safe, especially with all the problems that are popping up. And cheer up Trowa. Q's coming home.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 19:31 EDT
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Wow, it seems Tro and Quatre are having more problems than Wufei and Heero did. Poor guys. Perhaps soon they'll see what's right in front of them. It's not Trowa's fault he's protective. And he'll probably regret letting Quatre go for some reason or another. And I have to say that my opinion of Relena has inproved tremendously since the beginning of this story. She's pretty strong emotionally, now that she's not stalking anyone. But I feel bad for Heero; this'll be hard on him. Oh, and I wanted to mention something else. But I can't remember what chapter it's in, so I'll get back to you on that. Another excuse to re-read your butt-kicking story. Which all my friends are now addicted to now, thanks to me. But I won't mention it if I have no evidence to back it up. Great job, and I'm keeping my eye out for 3x4. And don't leave Heero out in the cold; poor baby...Wufei gets a new wife but Heero just keeps losing people...Can't wait for next chapter! Sorry I couldn't review the last one...
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Reviewed By: Faulted On: May 24, 2007 17:26 EDT
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Excellent chapter as usual, thank you so much for finally continuing your story. Hopefully the next update is already in the making, and will be here soon, lol. I can't wait to see what amazing feats will be performed later on in the story, and how Wufei's strange power manifests itself later on. Hopefully Zechs isn't a monster, but throwing in that twist was brilliant, and now I'm wondering how much more might have changed over the last few years that Wufei was away from his kindgom--and the war in general. Once again thanks, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: May 23, 2007 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good and illuminated my day beacause I have 2 days of exams after holiday...Begin Tomorow so thak you Xie xie.....Please update soon!^^
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Reviewed By: Stray [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 05:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have read the fic and enjoyed it very much. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. I hope Relena learns the truth soon or else she is not going to object against this marriage-thing and end up unhappy (I just can't see something like this stopping those two, especially if the bride is someone they know). But to be honest, the only way I can see people agreeing to Wufei's plans is if this strange mark of his tells them that Heero is the one and not her. I liked Mariemaia very much. She is evil incarnate. O.o And I can't wait to learn just how old Duo really is. Or what this power behind the mark really means. Btw, I think you got Hilde's name wrong (wikipedia says it's Schbeiker. Funny name.). Wufei's birthday is supposed to be December 12 (same source). And there is a slight continuity error: at the beginning you say that the track team tried to recruit Wufei for years (which implied they didn't succeed) and then in a later chapter (thirty-something I think) you say he has been on the track team. I'm looking forward to reading more! Good work. :)
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: April 19, 2007 11:23 EDT
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Wow poor Wufei and i want to kick everybody who is mean to Wufei!!!^^ Please continue and update as soon as possible!^^
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 11:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good thing Heero smacked Wufei, because I was about to do it myself. How could he say that with Releena there? How rude. And I know I was flipping out about her earlier, but she's an angel compared to Mariemaia. It could be worse. At least she hasn't attempted to kill anyone. And has Releena given up on Heero? Because she's acting like she has a crush on Wufei...how interesting. I love seeing Heero jealous; i'm sorry but I do. And I'm wondering what kind of vibes Quatre's getting from our least favorite redhead. Poor Q. The drama never ends. Please update soon. If I come up with any other questions, I'll review again. Or just mail you. We'll see. I'm loving this story more and more...
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: April 11, 2007 17:14 EDT
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Wow i really liked it!! No Duo is nice Please he is nice!!!Please update soon!!^^
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Title: hurry,hurry!
Reviewed By: Guardian 2024 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! another part! *excited, excited* Ne... I vote for another lemon sometime soon!! *hentai* ^___^;;
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, poor Fei! And what happened with Duo? Whay can't he be trusted? That wasn't him with the sword, because he would be too small to use it effectively. He didn't have something to do with the attack itself, right? And how did Heero fare after the roof collapsed on him? And I just noticed that we've never really seen much from Trowa's POV. I just thought that was interesting. From most people's, even Relena and Hilde's, bu tnot his. I'd kinda like to see his thoughts...if that came out right...
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