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| "Leather and Lace- saiyan love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all, Vegeta would like NEVER sing, and never tell bulma that he love her, just like that. I mean, it craves hours of sex, years of being with her, maybe some death before he will say those words. I like the idea of the fic, but it's just not realistic. Sorry. But otherwise, I must say, that I love songfics, and this one would be very good, if Vegeta would stay in character. Don't cry your eyes out, I think that you are able to write something very good, so write more.
| Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all, Vegeta would like NEVER sing, and never tell bulma that he love her, just like that. I mean, it craves hours of sex, years of being with her, maybe some death before he will say those words. I like the idea of the fic, but it's just not realistic. Sorry. But otherwise, I must say, that I love songfics, and this one would be very good, if Vegeta would stay in character. Don't cry your eyes out, I think that you are able to write something very good, so write more.
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