| "Kidnappers Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Title: ummmm
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
helpful criticism not a flame not a fan original.. yes.. fun to read.. not so much.. sorry. need a little work on how you carry the story out. had a good plot.. took too long to get to it. seemed it shouldve been a little more on a serious note.. there was way too much randomness and ooc times though. helpful criticism not a flame not a fan
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 20:52 CDT
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omg it waaassssssss ::cries:: sooooooo saaaaaadddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!::cries more:: i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was such a wonderful story!!!!!!!!!!!::cries even more:: i really liked it well hope you write more stories like this!!!!!::cries but stopes and smiles::
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon ~ Not signed in On: November 21, 2006 17:21 CST
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Chapter 7: First you said he threw a brush, then you said he threw a shoe. Make up your mind - which is it? Also, would any reasonable girl just leave her mother in the space of five seconds? Like kagome did? And what mother would let her? Honestly... Sometimes I worry for the sanity of writers... *scratches head* Well, my sanity is long gone, so no worries there!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:58 CST
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Chapter 6: Ransom is spelled without an e........
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:52 CST
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Chapter 3: Inuyasha and Sesshomarou in unison? How funny! (Your story is still really good...)
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:49 CST
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Chapter 2: Good. Lemons and limes are annoying. Your story is really good, by the way. Chapters are really short though.
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Reviewed By: inufan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. that was sooo cute but sad. u r excellent! i loved this story so much! ohhhh. i feel srry for kagome...i know. i am crazy right? WRONG? haha. okay i am. but that's so sad. but at least it doesn't end like almost every other inu fan fic i have read. this one actually had an original ending. none of that 'and inuyasha and kagome lived happily ever after blah blah blah' crap. haha great job! this one is on my favs!!
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Reviewed By: little-pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! thats so sad! that nearly mad me cry (which is very gd cos it don't happen often! :P) hope u write more stories!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 02:58 CDT
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mia just went off to cry in her little corner....now she's angry......and now she wants me to kill you.......WHY WON'T SESS SHARE HIS FLUFF?!?!?!?! i asked him that...and he nearly killed me....o.o ok that was way of topic..i cried....really i did...but yoai people are cool! and kouga isn't cool! >.< anyways we love yah! mia and em are outta here =P
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Reviewed By: GiGGITY On: July 21, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
u killed inuyasha*brings out pitch fork and michal jackson*now u must too
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Reviewed By: shaylablade(nsi) On: July 19, 2006 20:40 CDT
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................i liked the story.................but i dont like the ending.........
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Title: That was sad...
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was real good and I liked the fact that it was actually Kagome writing it the whole time, but it was so SAD! I guess I was half secretly hoping for some way for there to be a happy ending, but I guess that would've been hard huh? It was good though....
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Rachie! XDD On: July 19, 2006 06:13 CDT
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You made me cry. -stabs!- but it's ok... because when I read this /Sesshoumaru: You made me disappear… my black whole hurts! >O/ It got all better. XDD! Stupid Kouga. He's always wanted in Inu's pants. D
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Reviewed By: GIGGITY On: July 12, 2006 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE UPDATE NOW OR I WILL PUT EVIL HOODINKI CURSE ON JOO!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hallelulia!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuandKag4ever On: April 22, 2006 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!! Please! I die to know what happened next!!!! You are pefect!>_> UPDATE,UPDATE,UPDATE,UPDATE! Please!!!! Ciao -_-
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