|
| "A Boundless War" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: finkbird [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 04:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK this is my first review ever so I'll try not to say something stupid and fan crazed like "OMG! Please write more!" Steps up on podium and taps microphone with one finger... shifts nervously and looks down at the invisible hole in the floor. "First I would like to thank the writer for choosing to write a Samurai Champloo story, I wish there was more of them. Also I would like to tell readers that this story is well written and I think it has great possibilities (for lots of smut and tons of humor). The characters are done well and not ooc. Also I think using jins point of view is smart, after all he is the most thought out and intelligent character in this anime … though in my opinion I think Mugen is the sexiest…uhm..." looks up to see people reading this. "OH MY GOD! Please, please, please write more!" ......."crap." …Shrugs shoulders and dejectedly walks off. can't wait til next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Nilee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update!
| Reviewed By: the Black Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, I really enjoyed how you wrote it from Jin's POV (he's my favorite). Though in all honesty, I think the premise is a bit of a stretch, I like it, and it's an enjoyable story. The one thing in terms of writing style you may want to watch is the number of times you 'tell' us Jin is irritated or annoyed. It's understandable being in a first person POV, but places like "I sighed in annoyance"...the "in annoyance" part is unneccessary. Anyway, excellent work, I look forward to more. :) Love, Rose
o mo | Reviewed By: Dark Soul On: September 05, 2005 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!!!!!!! So funny!!! Please update!!!!
|
|
|
