Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, I just want to start off by saying...I love you. Ok, that's a bit strong. But I do love this fic. Truly. I'm an Inuyasha fic writer myself, and Miroku is by far my favorite character to contemplate. Your characterizations were perfect. Well done. Through the whole thing, I think I found a grand total of four grammar mistakes, and each of these was merely a missing word (like the, or something trivial like that) or a small mispelling. Really trivial, but you might want to give it another read through, just so you can catch them. Truly, truly you have done a great job with this oneshot. It has beautiful discription, great dialogue, and a nice, smooth flow. I really can't say enough about how much I enjoyed it. Keep up the excellent work, and thank you so much for your submission to FFRG! It was a great and worthwhile read!
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