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| "Bondless" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Nazomi On: October 02, 2005 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Wonderful and well written. Way to go! ^.^ My favorite part was the ending. Teehee... 'Loveless' indeed...
| Reviewed By: oorin On: September 06, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been searching for fics where Soubi makes Ritsuka's 'ears fall off' for a while now. I must say i was more than glad to get to this one. It's wonderful! Though I WAS hoping to see everyone's reaction to Ritsuka. Whenever I do find a fic like this, nobody ever includes the reaction!
| Reviewed By: Yayness On: September 03, 2005 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I so loved this story! I couldn't find a single thing to dock points from. It was really that awesome. I loved the ending. Excellent. I loved the first story, too, but you didn't write that. X3 But this was such a great sequel! Love it! I was actually imagining Soubi to go so far as to cross out "Beloved" and cut in "Loveless" into his own thigh as a sort of name-change (Man, he would have to be desperate XP), but this was just as nice, because it seemed as though they were destined after all. Awww, how sweet. :3 Everyone lives happily ever after. Except Shinonome-sensei...and Ritsuka's creepy counselor lady. But they don't count. Maybe they'll go and have Hitomi's ears removed. NYARK. ...I'll just stop now. XD Great fic!
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