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Title: YES
Reviewed By: I am Jacks Panic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazing story. Not only was it..enjoyable.. but it had a happy ending, which was sooo unexpected! Made me so happy. = ) Thank you!
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Reviewed By: jenni penni On: August 19, 2007 22:49 CDT
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Ahh, a happy ending! I'm going to cry. Seriously. Clearly, I need sleep. But when I spotted this story with my favorite pairing (Soubi on top, why don't more people write it?) I had to read it. Adorable, hot, cute, sweet, and it dealt with a question that wasn't dealt with in the anime, and not so far in the manga I've read. A really great story.
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omk.. that was so adorable... i had so many conflicting emotions through the whole thing with Ritsuka's name and Soubi worrying... but the end was so Kawaii... and i swear i thought i was gonna DIE laughing when Ritsuka got all flushed because he dropped the soap.. hahahahha....... keep up the good work.. hope to see more from you soon =D *smiles sweetly*
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Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 21:46 CDT
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I love you. I want to tacklehug you and squeeze you until you can't breathe. I loved the ending, though I was planning on using a variation of it in my fic, unless my best friend had already decided to dso it.... Won't she be crushed, but happy? XD I love how you made him Beloved and Loveless... Just so kawaii. I luffers you for this fic... It's just hard to pic whether the first or second part is better... Your style of writing is good, too, and I'm unsure if I saw that many typos... I think you forgot to add an s to the end of a word, but I guess that's it... We all get typos at one time or another. XP That was pretty original, especially because you'd expect "Beloved" to be replaced. Instead, you had Loveless written on his thigh, which is really prettyful. Reading this made me really happy, since I just finished the anime, and my best friend only gets a new volume of the manga every weekend. Considering this is only the sequel to "Strengthening the Bond," this, like its prequel, is my second Loveless fic, and I'm really happy that it is, because horrible writing would make me want to stop reading, and if I stopped reading Loveless fics, you wouldn't have this comment, ne? X3 Well, I think I wrote too much, so I guess I'll let you go... Wonderful writing, really. Keep it up!
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Title: Bondless
Reviewed By: vampxangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 10:09 CDT
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omg i adored the ending; it was absolutly perfect!!!! AMAZING JOB!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: megtheteler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I loved this take off on Loveless. I thought that you two did an awesome job and I want more to come! email me.
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Reviewed By: Kitty_chik23 On: March 04, 2007 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awsome ending... it made me fel all bubbley inside ^.^ nice lemon by the way ^.^
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Reviewed By: black_bengal_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so f*cking cute!!!!!!!!!! XD I loved it!!!!! I Was wondering whether or not we would see Ritsuka's fighter or not and it was soubi!!!!!!! XD!!!!!! OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!! -stops screaming and breaths for a second- wow.. so mcuh exclamation... oo, gotta go, I coulda sworn i smelled chocolate pudding. ~Ja-Ne!!
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Reviewed By: bishifangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 00:14 CDT
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yes I love you for ending it that way. Right now my life is like a highschool drama and a happy ending is well appreciated.
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Reviewed By: bb On: July 23, 2006 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. The best fic ever. Love both stories and oh! Wow! I don't how to express how awesome this fic is. Bravo. Bravisimo!!
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Reviewed By: Liannabob On: June 21, 2006 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was wonderful! *sniff sniff* You made me cry, dammit! Brilliant, just fantastic all around. Keep writing- there aren't enough fics of this caliber out there.
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Title: Mwuha!
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately, I read the prequel to this done by someone else before I read this one, so I kind of ruined it for myself... Even so, it's still one of my top Loveless stories. I'll assume that it was written before you were aware of the original ending, but I'll let it slide *wink, wink* Much Love!
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly loved this story! Both installments were amazing and I couldn't stop reading!
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Reviewed By: yamimylove(to lazy to log in) On: May 10, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the first and second fic, totally loved them!! the lemons! steamy hot!! i could almost see them, i just simply loved it! the ending was so cute!! "Soubi, did you get a tattoo?" He squinted his eyes to make out the pattern on his thigh. There, just beneath the curve of Soubi's hips, the word `LOVELESS' stood out in neat, precise lettering. I LOVED IT!! you and your pal write awsome!! no spelling errors, nothing to get bored with, simply PERFECT! loved how his ears dissapear, it was so cute! ok i gotta stop lol keep it up!! and if you could please do a fic of gravitation because that woul totally rock!! hehe love ya! take care
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Title: Another Favorite!
Reviewed By: Tears of Vincent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is another Fanfic that I totally adore! I loved the First one and I love the second part of the story as well. The Suprise ending made me happy! I can totally picture this actually happening! I would love it if it did! YOu both deserve my highest praise! I will be looking forward to more of your uber cool work! Thank you!=3
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Me lovey the ending so much, me wish to kissy yous, and Ritsuka, and Soubi, 'til you find it just downright disturbing! I've always loved twist endings! Thank you very much for soaking up some of my valuable weekend hours/minutes...whatever...XD
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Reviewed By: AyaMiru On: April 20, 2006 22:59 CDT
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I loved this!! I was all caught up in the story and the words and the Beloved vs Loveless thing...but this story just made my day!! Please write the sequel?? Where Soubi finds out he has Loveless written on himself???? *insert more shameless begging here*
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Reviewed By: tenshi suki On: April 01, 2006 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't tell you just how much I enjoyed your story! It was interresting, with a ending that is to die for, and wonderful details that allow the reader to understand fully the feelings the characters are going through and the things taht are happening. It all created a vivid picture for the reader making it that much easier and funner to read and enjoy. There wasn't much that I could see that needed any work. It was all well thought out, easy to fallow, and just an all around good story.
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