| "Otaku" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: smitten_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. a sequel would be great :-) |
Reviewed By: Jen On: May 28, 2002 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow something that was way over due in being addressed with how anyone would truly feel based on the way Vegeta treated Bulma most of the time. Most lemons are all lust lust lust makes it all ok. I sure hope you write a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 00:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! sooooo good! wow, you're amazing girl! i like all your fics, they were the first ones that i read when i started out (interesting & painfully interesting) good job! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What does it mean? Otaku that is. I like anyways. Keep on doing what you do, that is writing fanfics. |
Reviewed By: Ami Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2002 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so heart touching! i've read a lot of fics so far, and only a couple have been able to touch me like this, and that was a couple of years ago. *sniff* i even had tears in my eyes. thank u!! :')
*cough* but theres a little grammar problem with the fic... sorry. but there are several areas where u should at least have a comma or something like that, but u didn't so it got kinda confusing in there. you might wanna double check that... |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good, please do a sequel^_^ |
Reviewed By: The Stark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 21:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I did enjoy this very much. It did have depth to it, more than
a sexual relationship. I could imagine Veggie struggling, as well
as Bulma. I suspect it was a rough way for them to go, as both
appear to be such headstrong characters in the show. However,
something happened to create a bond between them...you captured it
well. I am confused: was the bite what upset her? How did he hurt
her? I understood there was emotional tension there, however.
Keep working on a sequil!
BB |
Reviewed By: connie On: January 14, 2002 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like hell yea there better be a sequel! this made me so emotional..i don't know what to feel!! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel? yes please! You have written as truly fantastic fic and I would love to read more!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 14, 2002 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great fic that's beggin' for a sequel. I must admit I was supprised when I saw this b/c I thought you would be getting ready to go to Japan (yea, I visit ur website every week so that's how I know). If you have the time to do a sequel I'll read it. Good job as always. Peace |
