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Reviewed By: amazingstorymate On: January 19, 2007 22:09 CST
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wow it's not very often you come around and find a story as great as this...huge props, mate, huge props.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:30 CDT
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I'm really hoping you continue this story. Good Job.
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Reviewed By: Hidari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Powerful. Riveting. Vividly written. You have effectively given reason to Itachi's choices, humanizing him and creating a believable story of his descent into 'madness'. Brilliant. I don't know what to think of Itachi. Pity him? Hate him? I have always questioned his motives for keeping Sasuke alive and goading him to hatred and revenge, reading this fic gives me even more to think about.
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Reviewed By: Ghost Rider On: June 17, 2006 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That... Was... SO COOL. I really liked it! Countinue please!
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Reviewed By: . On: June 17, 2006 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is pretty cool and offers a nice change from most fanfics about Itachi's(whom I consider the best and coolest chacter in Naruto)childhood.I'm still podering the question though of"Itachi could have easily kicked Orochimaru's ass,"but I guess its your desicion if Itachi isant the all powerful person he should be.This story is still very orignal and enjoyable of which is one of my favorites and I highly reccomend this fanfic.Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: raiia_xx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely. =] Everyone else pretty much summed up what I wanted to say... Really, I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait to read more. -Joyce`lynn
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Title: Oh wow...
Reviewed By: Ash Night On: April 20, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Entertaining, a truly marvalous tale!Your Writing is astonding!I can not wait to read your other works! One must wonder..You should try ang write a real book.You'd make millions.
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Reviewed By: whiteleopard On: April 16, 2006 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like ur fic. plez write more soon!
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Reviewed By: kyogre_latias [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...of all the fanfictions I'd read, I think this is one of my favorites. It really is awesome-serious.
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Reviewed By: Armina Skitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent, thought-inducing fic. It has some serious depressing factors, but it has that intruguie that grabs you and draws you in. I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter. Keep up the incredible work. Armina Skitty
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Title: A different type of story
Reviewed By: Turin ME On: February 22, 2006 08:26 CST
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This is the first fic of yours that I've read. I lked your style because it ddn't use cliches, nor was it overly dramatic. n_n the rational tone fit perfectly to your theme. I hope you continue this story!
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Title: I'm now going insane like Itachi...
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 17:36 CST
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OMG... you seriously should think about counseling...but that would just ruin the entire yuminess of the story, no? I can feel what you are going through because I struggle with manic depressive disorder, which often gives ground to some very angsty and drama related fics. However, I found the image in my head of blood quite...arousing. I could so compare myself to anko in all (I love the sight and taste of blood). I very much enjoyed this fic and I hope you continue. This story has had a rather profound effect on me, I now seem to be going totally insane. Losing my sanity like grains of sand passing through my fingers. (Please no one copy that line, I go fucking crazy like Itachi and well, you know...) Anywho, I hope to see you update this lovely fic and finish it for I deeply enjoyed the emotions it stirred within me.
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Reviewed By: cheryl On: December 31, 2005 19:54 CST
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I've been following your works- from Bearers of the Shards to Lord of the West- and with each piece you only get more and more skillful. This 1st person format you've chosen here is a very difficult one which you handle beautifully. I'm absolutely amazed at the honesty and authenticity you've put into Ichina's character. I'm also a bit stunned by the lack of reviews, but then again, Naruto has a smaller fandom than Inuyasha. (For now- wait 'til the anime gets going in the US!) Again, thank you for your story- I look forward eagerly to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: December 31, 2005 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear gods..this astounding. Truely brilliant in a morbid way, capturing the human curiousity and reeling it in like a fish, then it leaves you gasping like the hooked fish gasping for life, gasping for truth.....for reason..for why. Yes, why is the ultimate question, not how or what or when.Why? When I read this I was brought back, years ago to under a red ladder, shaded from the harsh sun and the looks of my fellow elementary schoolers. Strangely enough, I asked the same questions as Itachi in the story, I was startled by how well I could relate.I wonder if he felt that strange light yet heavy blankness full of color, the ultimate in between? It's a strange place I tell, have YOU ever been there? You wrote this magnificent piece of literature you must have thought these same thoughts years ago. I wonder, is Itachi's "truth" the same as yours? That's the one point I must argue though. How can truth be one thing? A simple strand of words? Even a thought or an emotion? Does truth even exist? Is it truely an end? Or is there something beyond that? And if truth does exist is it different for everybody based on biased experiences and emotions and points of view? That's the conclusion I've come to, if you wish to call it that. You made me THINK.....I love you. Platonically of course.
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: Yuugi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've read other fics on Uchiha Itachi's childhood life (in fact I'm writing one myself), but none have ever come close to what I expected them to be. Then I saw your quotes of this on the fanfiction forum and decided that I'd go and check it out. I was surprised when I found out it wasn't like the other Uchiha childhood fics I've read. I read it and I was just blown away. It's beautifully written and your writing style really has a good flow to it. But that's not all. I believe you have actually achived what many people cannot achive (myself included). I believed you have portrayed Itachi in character. I enjoyed this story immediately by the first few sentences and it kept me entertained throughout the entire thing so far. In fact, this story has inspired me to better my own piece of writing of Uchiha Itachi's life and I thank you for it. I hope to see more from you soon, and keep up the good work and beautiful writing style.
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