"I'm a Hazard" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 18:03 CDT Comment/Review: this is great i really like it please update soon
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 15:08 CST Comment/Review: this fic is soooooo sad. but interesting. keep it coming
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Title: FFARG review chapter 1 Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 21:00 CST Comment/Review: Thanks for submitting to FFARG. Your grammar and spelling are very strong, I suspect you have a good beta already. I am not someone who enjoys 'rapefics' and the background of Kagome's character was a little...off. It just really rubbed me the wrong way that 'ALL' these teachers had done this to her and she had them all as boyfriends. I could see it maybe happening once or twice...anymore than that and it seems to lose too much 'reality'. But the way you have started their relationship is nice. I like how he wants to try to help her get around and is worried about her. It's a great setup for him to be her 'hero'. Thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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Title: I'm A Hazard Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 16:54 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: I'm A Hazard Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 23:21 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 18:53 CDT Comment/Review: Great story! It's very deep and the plot is wonderful. Anyways, I hope you keep up the good work. ^_^!
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Title: I'm A Hazard Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 18:09 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: I'm A Hazard Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 15:04 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: I'm A Hazard Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 14:11 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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