Title: Wow Reviewed By: Lady Chii On: September 13, 2005 16:30 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This is a awesome story and I love it! It takes two great characters and puts it in such a lovely love story. If it was a movie the preview would sound like this:"this story was made by the mind of a true writer and a must have see it will be pluded in to the great love story of hitome and floken, a memorable story that you your self will be telling your friends to see"
Title: Good job Reviewed By: Sciguy On: September 06, 2005 22:33 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: i really enjoy the range of emotions the character are goign through. I cannot wait until the rest of the chapters come out
